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I built a new Twayobiz landing page - roast please
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Sewell Stephens
https://twayobiz.com
Hi! Overall I think it looks very clean, which I enjoy. A few points:
When visiting your page, I'm mostly interested in how your product differs from e.g. Dropbox or Google Drive. Do I understand correctly that 'branded sharing' is your key differentiator? I'd put some more focus on that. Now it's not very emphasized.
Instead of the stock photo of the girl behind a laptop, I'd prefer immediately to see some image that's already showing me your product. This stock photo could be used for pretty much any business, it doesn't really tell me anything about Twayobiz.
The logos below 'Trusted by' are quite pixelated.
Below that, I think you very clearly present your 4 main features. However, those screenshots are very white against a white background. I'd personally love for some more contrast that's bringing some more attention somehow to those images.
I hope this helps!
Hi, I changed the photo of the girl with a laptop to a picture of a girl with a step-by-step process of the app. I don't know what to do about the screenshots as box-shadow would not go with the rest of the landing page and a wider border would look weird. Also, the trusted by badges are a bit pixelated because I resized them.
I edit most of my graphics with Microsoft paint and Paint 3d on windows if you were wondering.