I completely overturned my landing page. Can you see...? (I'm desperate!)
To explain my situation, it has been 5 months since I launched a project that I have spent three years on, but I have not collected even 10 users.
So instead of giving up, I decided to completely change things. One of them is the landing page.
Previous landing pages aimed to save my personality, but everyone hated it.
So the new landing page was completely re-created with the aim of just looking normal... People will probably like it more. Could you confirm it...?
Landing Page: https://learnobit.com
Previous Landing Page: https://learnobittest.firebaseapp.com/
I went to you landing page with mobile browser (safari). The text was justified center and that made it a little harder to read. Some lines only had one word in the middle. Maybe has something to do with me having a small phone (iPhone se).
About the content, it could be useful to be more clear with the benefits of the product. Something like:
“Study four times faster thanks to the scientific principles of our app. Enjoy more your time. Have better grades. Study smarter. Etc”.
You know, something better, but making very clear the benefits of your app from the very start.
This depends on your target audience, but maybe try using less technical jargon. Something more accessible when explaining the app.
I will tell you what I understood from the page. (I went a little fast, in mobile —kind of perfect, makes me like most people going into a landing page :) ). This way you can see more or less what people are understanding from the page:
You organize the content to study in a tree system. This is a little confusing, I couldn’t immediately imagine how I could put something I might want to study.
You use an algorithm to know when to repeat the content so it’s memorized faster. This I understood. And it’s pretty cool.
The examples at the end of the page I didn’t understand (specially the part of the human body).
In any case some people have recommended hiring an expert. I don’t know how expensive those are, but considering the investment of time you have made it may make sense.
Have the best of luck!!
Honest feedback on why you should hire someone to help you redesign and re-write the copy of your landing page
Why is your app better than Anki? How are you marketing it? Maybe write a bit more copy. Lots of white space. Maybe add some graphics. Just some things I noticed.