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I hope you like pink

I just redesigned my landing page for hearling.com. I don't want to spoil what it does... so I won't tell you.

I have never made a landing page before, nor have I tried to sell anything online since I was a teenager. I would love to hear any feedback you have!

Thanks!

on February 17, 2020
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    Very nice website. I especially liked the demo buttons next to each header.

    The logo is a little funny, though. I would refine it to make less vulgar.

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    I didn't mind the pink much. Definitely have a need for the services. Not sure about the logo either. I see a tongue instead.

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      You are supposed to see a tongue 😁

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        Ooops, sorry 🙃. But I still associate a tongue with taste rather than speech FWIW

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    Hi there Nick,
    I took a quick glance at your website and think there is one major thing being overlooked. Who is the product for? You explain the features... But why did you build it? And for who? What use case are you selling? What A to B journey are you fixing? It might seem obvious to you and/or people already clear on what they are looking for, but that way you are missing out on adresing a wider audience AND getting a higher conversion (perhaps), based on not sharing the 'why'.

    Just some quick thoughts, hope it helps!
    -Christian Yke

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    Seems nice. Don't have any ideas for use cases, so I might not be your target market.

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    hi @NickOnTheWeb I spent some time on your site, have shared my thoughts here
    https://www.loom.com/share/be494a56d3414d55acd7d061de2abf7d

    Cheers!