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I just quit my job! Need feedback on my first landing page :)

After months of wrestling with myself, I was able to break the golden handcuffs and am getting started on the startup journey!

I've conducted a series of user interviews prior to building this landing page. I'm hoping to get some more validation on the problem I'm trying to solve through this approach. I don't have an eye for design unfortunately and have no prior experience building landing pages.

Specific things I'd like feedback on:

  • Is the problem being solved clearly communicated?
  • Is our approach to solving the problem clearly communicated?
  • Is the call-to-action clearly communicated?
  • Are there any other design red flags?

http://matchfluence.com/

Happy to be a part of this vibrant community. I'm hoping to be a lot more involved in the coming months.

P.S: We're having issues on mobile so I'd appreciate if you gave feedback on the web version. Also, I'm still working on getting the url name and icon updated.

on September 1, 2020
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    Have you worked with any brands already? Perhaps showcase that? Especially if you have paying customers as this is a B2B play.

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      We've got two customers so far. I was going to wait to get 5 customers before adding brands to the page. Would you recommend adding the two logos?

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    Looks good! I found your problem and solution were clearly conveyed.

    Just one thing, I opened your landing page on mobile and the width was no set correctly, which required me to zoom in to read the text.

    Good luck on your journey!

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      Yeah, I'm having issues on mobile that I'm trying to fix.

      Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated!