I just update my landing page, what’s your thought?

strange name - how did you come up with it? but I dig the design aspect

Your name and graphics suggest this is a Black people community, but your copy doesn't. Which one is true? If it's meant to be for everyone, change the graphics to a white/different ethnic person to balance the name!

Hi there Jin, can I ask what the thought behind the name is? There are also a number of copy points that would be interesting to test with your audience to see whether they resonate.

If you're interested in a more comprehensive audit with user testing and feedback, please feel free to check out my website. Best of luck!

I liked the design! Clean and colorful!

My only actionable suggestion would be to make it easier to recommend or suggest resources (this may be because I’m viewing on mobile).

For example, under newsletters, I’d suggest adding my newsletter Blogging Guide.

https://bloggingguide.substack.com

All our content is geared toward passion economy creators and I just helped cohost a Substack office hours as the first guest author:
https://on.substack.com/p/office-hours-7/comments

Super cute! love it

It took me a lot of time to load another page when I clicked on Explore Learn button. Other than that, the design looks great!

I think it looks really good! I saw some places where you can improve, like one of the blocks gave me a feel of footer, and then I kept scrolling down, realizing it's not.
Try to use Twik to personalize the user experience, it can present each user different block first, that can match the user interest.
For example, I would be more interested to sell and not buy, so maybe present me the last block first, and later on the market place itself.
Besides, looking good!

It's a very bright, attractive page. I like the design.

I think there's a bit too much on the one page. Consider splitting the content out, so that the landing page can focus on setting out what the product is. It wasn't until I got to the "Features" section that I really began to relate to what I could use it for - it seemed like a lot of buzzwords up until that point.

Consider simplifying the page and not having so many images and animated sections - it's very distracting. It's great that you have that many quality images, but splitting these over several pages will break-up the content a little for the reader.

The copy needs some attention, as there are some phrases that seem translated or a little clunky - e.g. "Follow interest and get information that matter to you.". I guess this was meant to be "Follow a topic and get relevant information on it".

Good luck!

I like it.

There is a typo in the hero section - it should read 'enables' not 'enable'.

It would be great to see an About page :)

I would also agree with a few other comments that it seems to be too broad in terms of the value proposition - what is the core value that you are delivering to customers RIGHT NOW?

Your Landing page now looks really amazing. Update websites content and landing page are important in Google Ranking. I also Change my Landing page of my website: https://www.natures-bloom.com/aaron-lal/

I think you need to narrow the focus. It's challenging with something like you have because there are so many components to the product, but it will be more powerful and persuasive if you lead with a single, concrete benefit.

Think about who your ideal customer is. What do they desire or struggle with the most? What is it about this product that will help them. Make sure you put this in specific terms. "Become a better creator" is too generic. Better is subjective.

I also agree with Jaymie that some of the copy doesn't read right. That's probably a translation thing. At the least I would have a native speaker proof read it to clean that up. Hiring a professional copywriter would be even better.

Looks great ! Good job and best of luck

Sign up feature is still WIP 😅