I just updated my landing page copy. Need feedback
Hi, indie hackers. I have been on an iterative course over the last few weeks to improve my landing page copy and make it easy for the people to understand what my app does and how it's useful for them.
https://tradeplan.co/ is the landing page. I highly appreciate your feedback on it.
Thanks,
#landingpagefeedback
I agree that the page looks solid, I'm just - but this me being about details - wondering if it is my email that you want in the form... Or Twitter handle, phone number, or..? Other than that: anything that comes close to inside trading benefits: sign me up ;).
I appreciate the app and all, but isn't TA just a bunch of baloney? ;)
who said that. :-)
Overall I like the page a lot. Big highlighted benefits, call to action at the top and bottom of the page. Lots of good stuff.
The initial line "Scan crypto based on your Favorite technical indicator" is a little weird with capitalization. Technical Indicator is capitalized in the next paragraph, but not in the title.
Also, I'm not your target market or familiar with technical terms, but what does "Scan crypto" mean to me? Scanning doesn't seem to have a tangible benefit to me, but rephrased as "Never miss a trade. TradePlan keeps you updated updated on crypto automatically" makes it a little more customer centric IMO.
Nice work!
I was thinking of adding "for" in-between" Scan Crypto" like "Scan for Crypto" basically the tool to help you filter thru 100's of crypto-based on your personal condition which is the indicator(KPI).
I didn't capitalize Technical indicators any were. That's the normal font.
I am targeting people who know whats technical Indicator as that the bases for the app. User needs to know technical indicators to use my app to filter it.
Thanks for the feedback.
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