I’ve just launched the second tool from Tryvorax Labs: Landing Page Critic.
After building Domain Finder, I kept seeing the same pattern: a founder can have a useful product and a decent domain, but still struggle to explain clearly why someone should care.
Landing Page Critic is designed to help with that first question: is the landing page clear enough for a new visitor to understand the value and take the next step?
It offers:
A free clarity snapshot
Three concrete findings
One priority action to improve the page
I’ve also added a paid full report for €6.99, with a deeper diagnosis, suggested copy, experiments and a 7-day action plan.
It’s early, and I’m particularly interested in whether the recommendations feel genuinely decision-useful rather than just “interesting”.
Try it here:
https://tryvorax.com/tools/landing-page-critic
If you’ve built or reviewed landing pages before: what is the most common reason you see otherwise-good pages fail to convert?