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I literally put my balsamiq sketches as landing page illustrations. Honest feedback?

I've just pivoted and revamped my landing page. As I didn't have the time and resources to make illustrations, I just put screenshots of my my balsamiq sketches.

You can check out the landing page here โ†’ https://getacute.io

I would really appreacite your honest feedback.

on November 28, 2019
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    It was a bit difficult to read into the text on mobile. I guess if there will be vertical, step by step diagrams serving same purpose, they will explain the product well

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      Thank you for pointing that out. Do you usually search for services and read landing pages on mobile?

      I'm wondering if being mobile friendly should be a priority right now. I'm assuming most people would be on desktop.

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        Yes, it should. Just swap the images out on mobile and you're done.

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          Okay, thank you. Done ๐Ÿ™‚

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    looks good. the 2nd part of your installation 3 steps... the tags seem weird. open head, open script, close head, close script.

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      Oh my god, I didn't even notice it. Thank you so much for pointing it out.

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    On mobile, it was a bit hard to read the text in the images. Also, the mobile navigation seems broken on android.

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      Thank you for pointing that out. I'm not sure if being mobile friendly is a priority right now. Do you think it's important?

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        Over half of all web traffic is mobile. It's up to you, but I always prioritize mobile design.

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      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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      These are awesome resources! Thank you for posting ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

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      Yes, it's Bulma. Thank you for the links, I'll check them out. ๐Ÿ™‚

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        Nice work.

        You welcome!

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    The landing itself looks amazing to me. Both aesthetically and when it comes to the info presented - I understood very fast what your product does!

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      Thank you so much!

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    Look great and has the added benefits that when/if the software changes the landing page will not need altering.

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      Thank you. I was afraid it would give the impression that is just a proof of concept

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        Not at all if you look at https://www.dropbox.com/business they do something very similar and use "mockup" images and they did use some hand-drawing styles illustrations a few years back with a similar style onboarding video that I really liked.

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          Thank you for the link ๐Ÿ™‚

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    The site looks great! Nice, clean and easy to read. Nice work!

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    I like it a lot. Itโ€™s a really nice page. Great work. ๐Ÿ‘

    I see a few people have already mentioned mobile..
    For me a good mobile experience is critically important.
    I use my phone for almost all web browsing.

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