I’m launching my first business. I’d love feedback about my landing page
Hello y’all.
I’m in the process to start my first entrepreneurial / business adventure. And I’d really love your help.
For the past four years, I’ve worked in corporates as a software developer / front end engineer. My work usually included building custom marketing and other complex custom websites for other companies, startups.
I’ve learned a lot from this and also developed some automatism, patterns that I think might be beneficial to other people.
Right now, I’m working on launching a subscription - based custom website development service.
Basically for a fixed monthly price, my customers will get a full website, performant, and following SEO best practices, with the necessary custom integrations (headless CMS, chatbot, etc…).
I’ve worked on the service’s landing page, and I’d love your feedback about it. Here’s the link: https://www.orcheweb.com.
I’d love to have feedbacks about whether the service is clearly communicated and understandable, if the added value is appealing, and any other feedbacks you might have.
Thanks a lot 🙏🏽. Hoping to hear back from you all 🙂.
Hey there Justin, I think it's a solid effort that's neatly laid out. I'd be more interested in who your ideal customer is and what they're looking for. I would suggest that you showcase those kinds of end products more prominently. Almost portfolio style.
A couple of other things and these are just my personal preferences around copy. Why not try to humanize the message and say things like "Fixed pricing - no surprises!" rather than "Fixed predictable pricing" or "Unlimited revisions" vs "Unlimited free revisions". I would probably have a copywriter go over this and suggest some light edits.
Thank you for taking a look @Firebeard.
The ideal customer question is a very good point. So far, I've mostly worked with entrepreneurs/small business (in tech and education) who are launching their online presence. These are also the type of customers I'd like to work with long term.
I'll add more copy about that, maybe as cases studies 🤔.
Thanks for the phrasing suggestions.
Hey there, took a look at your website it's very nice, but you made a spelling mistake 'Take a loot at what we've been working on recently' should be Take a look at what we've been working on recently
Hey, congrats on your launch!
Writing my thoughts as I read the page.
This sounds way too generic, gives me zero info on what the product is, what problem it solves and how. "Get your website done" sounds like it's a website builder or website building service/agency. That text is also a bit too large to be comfortable to be read on a large monitor.
This doesn't seem to go well with "get your website done". If my website is done, why would I pay a monthly fee instead of a one-time fee?
Reaching the bottom of the page, the FAQ doesn't answer my main question: why pay such a high monthly fee for simply building a website. I am also left with the impression that this is simply a web agency, nothing more, nothing less.
Very nice, looks clean and clear for the customer :)
Thanks for giving a look @launchunicorn.