Hi, everyone I'm re-designing this website: https://deeplizard.com and I need some feedback. here is my version: https://xd.adobe.com/view/348b09c5-f8d5-4916-bece-ba04116137ce-61d8/?fullscreen thank you all.
Hi Abbes,
The first thing that jumped out to me is that your hero H1 is your website name. You don't need to do this as you've already got the domain and the logo top left.
Use this H1 and H2 instead to shout about the problem you're solving, or why your solution is the best. Whether it's "The easiest way to learn about machine learning", or even "More than 6 million views on YouTube".
Basically, something that tells the visitor that you know your shit, and they should listen.
Beyond the hero, the page is good. It's clear, concise, and funnels users to the courses.
Overall, good work. I'd just polish your hero.
I hope this helps
Jon
Thank you Jon, that was very helpful, thank you 🙏
Your version looks better than the existing version, but careful with the spelling errors and not having enough focus on what matters!
Thank you so much for your feedback.
and especially "not having enough focus on what matters!", I will put that in my consideration.