I need some Landing page advice
Hey indie hackers,
I launched Idea Bakery 10 days ago.
It's a tool that helps independent creators tweet without getting stuck with assistance from GPT-3.
Emerging tweeters get stuck trying to articulate their interests in fresh ways. I wanted idea bakery to be a place to practice so that you wouldn't get stuck whilst also turning writing into a joyous ritual.
I'm wondering if the indie community had some feedback on the landing page or any advice on how I could connect this with people who might find it useful.
This is the link: https://www.ideabakery.app/
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I watched the first 20 seconds of your screen recording and there was no actual information in these 20 seconds. I’d try to get to the point. Quick.
After those 20 seconds I scrolled through the page and wanted to see some screenshots but they were all too small to look at on mobile. Can you show mobile screenshots instead?
Good luck with the app, Shavin!
Thanks for the feedback, @nikwen!
I'll do an optimisation round for mobile.
Haha, I'm not used to doing video. It took me like 20 tries to get to that version. It got in the way of launching. I thought it was decent enough, so I launched it with that. I'll make it better. 🙂
Yes, it's a good idea to launch something unfinished and then optimize it later when you get feedback from people on it. 👍
There's a pretty good section on demo videos in Julian's landing page guide. The section is titled "Should I include a video?".
I love Julian's writing! Thanks for sharing it.
Yeah, and I think it's not going to be as useful with the feature updates in the future.
What's your twitter @? let's connect?
You can find my Twitter on my profile if you want.