I need you to roast my landing page to a 🔥🔥🔥🔥crisp, urgent!!
https://balsamiq.cloud/saooehs/pwz1n73
Hey all!
This is a very rough landing page wireframe...I am really here just to test a couple of things in the textual part of this Landing Page:
-Concision: Do you understand what Storce does?
-Clarity: Is it vague in any way?
Any feedback, in general, would be greatly appreciated.
Heres the link to the wireframe: https://balsamiq.cloud/saooehs/pwz1n73
Thanks for your time, everybody!
Really good start! Plenty of great copy, good use of CTA's and customer testimonials.
The only suggestions I'd have would include:
Add more testimonials as a carousel in the current placeholder. This will help increase social proof.
Removing some of the text above the first CTA button. Maybe just keep 'start working on real world projects'. I personally find that the additional copy takes away from the CTA.
I'd also suggest keeping all the CTA consistently aligned in the centre throughout the page.
This are just my personal opinions, but I think you've done well!
Great! I have taken your feedback (along with reddit's r/sideprojects) and changed a couple of things (the carousel will be added later)
https://balsamiq.cloud/saooehs/pwz1n73 plz check it out.
Here it is, again: https://balsamiq.cloud/saooehs/pwz1n73
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