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I stopped neglecting my landing page, thoughts?

The landing page for RestEz was the last thing on my mind so I spent a good chunk of time today looking for some nice templates to utilize.

I think I'm finally happy with something that "looks the part" now thanks to the Nextly template (https://github.com/web3templates/nextly-template).

Check it out at https://restez.app and let me know your thoughts. Especially on the wording of features and CTA.

on February 2, 2024
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    Matt this is great!

    I think you are writing to your peers instead of the customers and that’s an easy fix.
    Example: you refer to your app as a SaaS and a free trial as a free MVP.
    Solution: write in a more customer-centric tone.

    Second, show the app instead of the illustration above the fold. You want to set up the expectation of using the app on your landing page and then exceed that expectation with the trial.

    Great job. Looks like a practical solution. Good luck!

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      Thank you! I will give those changes a go and see how they look. I'm not sure how well a screenshot of the app will look as it's only very basic design but lets find out.

      I used MVP in the CTA as it is just that, a very bare bones solution to get early customer feedback. Would saying free trial at this stage be misleading?

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        Not at all. Try it Free or something like that would work fine. I would find a restaurant owner group on reddit or something and work with them for feedback.

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          Good to know! I'm thinking something like "Explore our FREE offering today" as an alternative but that might be a bit long.

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            Yes, as long as the meaning is 80% there, then it’s ok. As a creator you will tend to be a perfectionist, but don’t let variations of the same intention and meaning slow you down 👍🏼 Shoot for the simplest and shortest, like Free Trial. I personally like to frame CTAs with verbs like Try it for Free, but go with your style.

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              Thanks for your input on the wording, I've implemented some of the changes you suggested now :)

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                Looks great! Check the margins on desktop, and fix that, but I think this sets the expectation. It’s clear what you’re getting and I think this will convert if the need is there. Post an update after you get feedback from your target customers!

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                  Just a cool feature request, give the restaurant customers a button in the bathroom to report it unclean!

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                    That's something I've got planned for the public washroom page! I want to add the ability for them to rate how accurate the latest status is :)

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                      Very exciting!