I will audit and redesign your homepage (hero section) for Free.

Hi Dina, here is my feedback:

• I would suggest changing the logo. Although it looks nice, I don't think it will resonate with your target audience.
• I like how you're displaying the dashboard in the hero section, so users can see what they will get once they subscribe.
• Make sure your hero section includes the term FREE beta access so visitors know what to expect right away when they arrive on your site.
• Add to the features section what makes your software stand out from the competition.
• Even if the steps are very basic, it's always helpful to include a how-to section to show potential customers just how easy your software is to use.
• Include an about us section with a story on how you came up with the idea, especially since you are an artist yourself.
• A FAQ section is always a good addition to the landing page.

Otherwise, I believe your product solves a real problem, and you just need to highlight it with appropriate copy and design tweaks.

Here is the link to the hero section redesign: https://ibb.co/fSY7c9D

Wishing you a successful launch.

Hi Dina, sorry for the late reply! I'll send you my feedback this weekend. Thanks for offering to help, I appreciate it!

You should definitely create a proper landing page explaining what this tool is about and why your target audience needs it by listing their current problems and the solutions your tool will provide.

• Make sure to add a logo to your landing page.
• Use visuals to show your visitors what your tool is about, especially since your solution says it helps users manage their cloud storage with visuals.
• Add a how it works/features sections.
• At the bottom of the page, request their email address so you can include a message explaining what they get when they subscribe, such as product updates or discounts or an early adopter's offer.

As promised, you can find the hero section redesign I made through this link https://ibb.co/Qc20gRH. Let me know what you think.

Hi Thomas,

Your landing page is very straightforward and concise. Btw, I loved the logo and the color scheme.

However, I have a few remarks regarding the structure and the branding:

• The above the fold section does not include any visuals of the app, always include a visual such as a video/image/gif to let visitors know what they are getting.
• The call to action "Get the app" should have an accent color to grab attention.
• Remove home link from the menu (logo will act as home button)
• You don't have a "How it Works" section; be sure to list the steps a user should follow to use your product.
• A FAQ section is always a good addition to the landing page.
• Add testimonials for social proof. (You can add these before the FAQs and in the hero section)

The app itself is great and with a few tweaks on your landing page, it can be made to convert better.

You can find the hero section redesign I made through this link https://ibb.co/jZmk0g4. Let me know what you think.

I hope your project goes well and thanks for offering to help.

As you mentioned, you're condensing a lot of information in the hero section.

Always make sure to make it short and clear by answering these 3 questions:

1. What do you do?
2. How your product will help them?
3. What do they need to do to get your product?

I recommend following this structure for "below the fold":
1- Talk about the pain points and problems your audience is facing
2- Show them how your product can resolve these problems
3- Explain how it works
4- Show the pricing
5- Add an about section or a founder's note

Otherwise, here are a few remarks to help you make a more appealing homepage:

• Your logo looks more like a headline
• Remove home link from the menu (logo will act as home button)
• Use no more than 2 colors for your buttons (consistency is key)
• Change your favicon

As promised, I made a quick redesign for the hero section (I tried to include all the info that already exists on the current website). I designed a new logo as well. You can check the new hero section through this link https://ibb.co/47h8b9g.

Let me know what you think!