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I will review your landing page as an average Joe

by Shashank

I have plenty of time to kill so, why not help fellow Indie hackers :)

I am neither a landing page expert nor a copywriting pro. I will review your landing page as an average internet user.

Maybe it will help you - may be not.....Let's see.

To give a bit of background of myself - I work on my small-time SAAS Blanq and I am a developer by profession.

Please share your link below and I will do my best.

Shashank's avatarShashank
on December 4, 2020
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    Hi Shashank,

    Thanks for offering to do this. I posted yesterday in this group but haven't gotten any replies.

    Would love #landing-page-feedback for Polished. Here's the site:

    https://getpolished.com

    I won't provide any more context to prevent influencing your understanding of the service.

    Look forward to your thoughts!

    Will

    WillSmithSF's avatar WillSmithSF
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    6 years ago
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      1. "Get hired faster with a polished resume." is instantly clear to me. I know what your site will be about even before I scroll further.
      2. "Hiring Pros to Review Your Resume". Took me by surprise. Good one but, point 1 headline does not talk about it. Maybe it should.
      3. Overall great design and fonts. Gets the message across.
      4. My personal opinion is to remove the Blog section on the landing page. I have not seen anybody else do this. It also slows your page down. And short landing pages convert better from what I read.
      5. One thing that this landing page missed is to convince me to pay and use. While it talks about features, it does not convey the benefits of using the service. I think you might need to work on this.

      Hope that helps.

      Shashank's avatar Shashank
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      6 years ago
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        Thank you for this @start123. #2, #4, and #5 are great points that I'll address!

        Much appreciated,
        Will

        WillSmithSF's avatar WillSmithSF
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        6 years ago
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    www.devmonitor.io
    Thanks in advance :)

    dawid's avatar dawid
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    6 years ago
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      First impressions

      1. "Free website monitoring" sounds a bit short and incomplete.
      2. Live demo link is not working.
      3. You have simple and cheap pricing. I like it.
      4. While you have started great with the website - it gives me a feeling of being new and lack details. Check this for example https://hyperping.io/.
      5. I would love to see some images on your landing page. It feels text-heavy now. Show - don't tell.
      Shashank's avatar Shashank
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      6 years ago
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