I would like to hear some feedback about www.navitapp.com landing

I've traveled couple of years and times around the world, and spent tons of time in travel planning so your main value prop "save time on travel planning" was 100% hit for me. After that things turned south:

.. Design overall was okey-ish, not bad, not particularly stylish or polished

.. Readability of subhead was horrible: white text on top of white sand.

.. Section "Your travel in 3 steps" got me completely confused at every step:

1. "Identify preferences" No idea what preferences you are talking about.

2. "Add travel details" Eh what? I thought the point of your App was that it helps me to figure out the travel details for me.

3. "Choose your route" seems overlapping with travel details above, i.e. if i need/want to visit a city then i enter it in step 2, and if i don't well then i don't care that much about the route in between. Then "the system finds places" further confuses things: does this mean itinerary of airports, or some nice places to visit within destination. Finally "the choose from 3 routes" is a turn off, in practice getting optimal travel plan done requires much more iteration.

.. Lot of critical information missing, for example what sources you use to search the flights and hotels, e.g. do you really find the best prices.

.. Instead of the critical information, the longest copy text of the entire landing page is spent on explaining why you use a bird on your logo, and do it in broken English.

So, the core idea might be good, but your implementation doesn't seem to match at all with my needs, plus the landing page needs serious work.

Hope this helps & good luck