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I'd appreciate any feedback for my new project landing page!

by Brent Smith

I'm still in the early stages of working on this project. It mainly started out as a project just for myself, but then after looking at other projects mentioned on this site I thought maybe it could be for others too.

https://cassini.netlify.app/

It's a boilerplate SaaS kit for .NET and React (my preferred stack). Similar to BulletTrain.co or https://usegravity.app

Brent Smith's avatarBrent Smith
on June 9, 2020
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    @orliesaurus already gave you great feedback, but I'l a bit since I was looking for something similar a while back:
    You need to make it more clear the technologies it built on (react, .net) since thats the biggest thing that will guide many peoples choice. (put the logo in there at least)
    I'd also like to see some screenshots of how things actually look (permission management interface for example)

    I ran it through my tool, you have a few minor typos you might want to fix: https://app.pagewatch.dev/e7e0a69d85b7518125e21aa242c31916633df53e/dashboard

    lpellis's avatar lpellis
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    6 years ago
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    Here I break down what I would change with your landing page:

    https://youtu.be/M2WQ2AH84-M

    Ultimately it boils down to:

    • Better copy to focus on the problems you're solving for your customers
    • Usage of better CTA to elicit an action
    • Using real images and data points to make your solution stand out
    • More in-depth information about your features we're developers, we're picky!
    • Missing lead magnet in pre-footer
    • Footer?
    orliesaurus's avatar orliesaurus
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    6 years ago
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      Thanks so much for taking the time to do that, it was awesome!

      Brent Smith's avatar Brent Smith
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      6 years ago
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