Hey all, I am launching a new section on my website for first impression videos and figured I'd offer to review your landing page for free.
You have to be willing to share it with everyone (obviously) as it will go on my website at Growth Insider
I do audits professionally for a living. Comment below if you're up for it.
Awesome! https://portabella.io
Here you go Alex! https://www.loom.com/share/e9b9862dc1204504819887ea3172e55a
Woah, just watched this, amazing! That is seriously invaluable feedback.
I feel you've got a ton of experience because you were highlighting things I definitely had not thought of. You've given me a ton of motivation to go back and rework my landing page.
Glad it was useful!
Just watched this and I really liked all that information. I am doing the last adjustments at my landing page and hope to post here soon.
Definitely recommend, for me this was priceless. Just took a few hours to address most of the feedback @genemachine gave me and I'm super happy about the end result. Still a few more things I could clean up but night and day compared to where it was this morning
Thanks for the kind words, Alex!
There are +126 comments (let's suppose 50% from other people) and 30 likes. This man is doing free video reviews for everyone, and likes will give him credit and even points on IH. Please give him a like, It only takes a second.
Appreciate the kind words Gonzalo!
Someone did it for me once. It seems appropiate. Keep up the good work! I already commented my project, if you still are doing this :)
Really great reviews Gene.
https://jsonmaster.com
Launching on PH tomorrow, maybe some last-minute edits!
Here you go, sorry if it's too late for your launch: https://www.loom.com/share/e44f2c1e643b47e4a20d31680f0ea8b9
Thank you Gene, these tips are great and your perspective is very helpful.
Hi Gene!
Great offer.
Please help me out here: https://webmedic.com
Thank you
Faisal, video here: https://www.loom.com/share/037b7c08ebed40b386a5874d11c16b1b
Boom! That was good insights, agree with you and will work on adding more relevant details and case studies.
Thank you, let me know if you have any website issues :D
I'll let you know asap.
@genemachine Not sure if you're still cranking these out but would love to get your thoughts on https://realoop.com
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/df8ec6d63eb04bf3ab191d7422b47c41
This is fantastic! Thanks @genemachine
I'll get to yours tomorrow, just tired for the night ;)
Looking at how many users you've replied to, I think you have done more than enough!
I'll do all ;) This is fun.
https://dorik.com
Thank you!
Beautiful product! Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/e7c9eaedabe6405d9cdff327c33a1690
Thank you so much for the review! 🙌
I have sent you an email with early access details. :-)
Hi Gene, it would be much appreciated if you could review our landing page for orderabl.com
Many thanks,
Ben
Here you go Ben: https://www.loom.com/share/ddd614c640b949dbbed9e7150d63689c
Hi Gene, thank you for going out of your way, and giving up your time, it's a selfless gesture we highly appreciate you creating this video. It was important to us to have someone who has some technical knowledge, constructively review the site. We watched your video as a team (gathered around one computer) and you raised some very good points, and we are now going to completely redesign the site, as currently it's not fit for purpose.
Thank you @genemachine.
Best regards,
Ben
Oh wow! That's interesting! Let me know if I can review your new site for you if you like. Just email me (email in profile)
Brilliant, this would be great. Thanks!
That would be awesome😱 My landing page is https://targetaudience.app
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/8ce8bb03f33e4794a597f8c41c03147f
Short followup thought: https://www.loom.com/share/c2f7e04fa28e465e9f84bf6ca7b22cc8
Hi Gene,
Thank you so much for reviewing my landing page. I love it that I see a real human talking about it, it feels way more personal.
You are absolutely right about the "Scanning my landing page" button! I'd love to see it as you pictured as well. Just insert that URL and get a part of the feedback🎉 It's something I'm planning to build.
You gave some nice insights, once again, thank you!
Hello, I reviewed your website. I think you need to work on the titles. Make it bold to be more clear.
Will do!
Yes please https://remoteletter.com/
Sagun, here are my thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/b1984807290643348fc7c34dfb24decf
Thank you so much for your feedback. I am working on some content of my own but not finished yet. Will add them soon as I am just starting out.
Awesome! Glad to help. Good luck on our newsletter!
Thanks, will do.
This sounds like a great idea! I would love to hear your thoughts on https://gamepresskit.com
Video: https://www.loom.com/share/d4300d28ff0d48cb89764895bdd8eefb
Followup thought: https://www.loom.com/share/34b2bb3aa02842c08d7b787ccd299f85
Really amazing feedback! Thanks so much for taking the time to put those together, there is a lot of actionable items in there. Thanks again!
Ryan, glad I could be of use to you. If you are ever looking for other tips or growth advice, check out my newsletter (growthinsider.co) or not.. I won't be offended haha. Good luck to you! Cool product!
Cool will let you know when ready
Exactly what I needed, here is the landing page: https://fulldiv.com/
Let me know if you want a free membership.
Have a good day.
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/80b9f630679645698af67042d1b46ac1
Wow, your feedback is really great, I really appreciate the video. I'll contact you when I update the page. Thank you.
Follow-up thought: https://www.loom.com/share/7caf5a2e8d5146e4865912313c656c2f
I'll look into it, I thought about adding a timer but didn't want to give it a "fake guru" vibe, but You're right, I'll add a timer for the pre-order period.
Timer is definitely optional. My main concern is that the page have some sort of urgency (could be accomplished with copy). Let people know there is a deadline, and that is approaching ;)
Will do, ty
A little late to the party. How about reviewing https://www.utilize.app?
Wonderful, Thanks a lot in advance.
https://insightfactory.app
Hupport.com please audit this page and share your feedback
Thank you for the opportunity, Gene!
Here's my landing page:
https://www.dashly.io/
Hey Gene, in case you're not totally sick of looking at landing page by now I'd love to get your feedback.
https://www.alura.io/
Hey ;) I'm set on videos for now but I took a quick glance and saw that your page is great! I can tell what the product is and what it does.
One thing to consider is emphasizing benefits. So maybe instead of "easy research" focus on why that's important > Find top selling products on Etsy so you don't waste time and money on poor performing products" -- obviously not that long, but you get the idea. Emphasize the benefits in titles - be it faster to profit, time savings, whatever. Tie the tool to the vision of making more money on Etsy, faster.
Hey Gene, thanks a lot - appreciate the feedback! Just checked out your newsletter and a few of the videos you did. Nice writeup!
This is great, Gene. would love to hear your thoughts on: https://gofloaters.com/
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/26ac1540a9ce4b88a49779492c5356ca
Sure thing, I'll get to you tomorrow (late here now).
Hi @genemachine. Take a look over https://www.writenext.io/ - we just made a redesign yesterday, so eagerly waiting for your thoughts. 😄
Hey Stefan, great app! I recorded some thoughts but didn't have much in terms of tips, it seems you already do things well: https://www.loom.com/share/b216924c80554714b8a7face4853008a
Thanks 🙌
Hey, I got you down on my list, I will try to get to you ASAP!
Hi, thanks for the great offer.
https://feelyou.app/
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/7eb4d9e9c3d64920888165d9004ab225
Thanks, I have you on the list, sorry for the delay, things have been busy! Will hear from me soon!
Sounds great - I'd love a review: https://teamo.team/
Alexandra, I have not forgotten about you! Sorry for delay I will get back to you ASAP
No problem, thanks so much!
Here you go! https://www.loom.com/share/1d8ffe1e60724e66acd17b8e41d8d6f4
Really cool https://slackonapp.com
What a fun app! Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/ba93166fad724b02997179ff09298a55
Thanks so much man. You make a lot of really good points. I’ll take those into consideration
Sorry for delay, I will get on this ASAP
on this please: https://nexshot.io
Here you go Ali: https://www.loom.com/share/746aace2f1904f7195d23930f8e1ed43
Have not forgotten about you Ali! Be back asap!
thank you, Gene, thank you for amazing feedback, will work as per your suggestions. also would love to have you as our founding members as well.
My pleasure, Ali!
Love the referral program after signup. What are you using for this?
I'd love to see a leaderboard showing # of referrals, and top 5 people randomly get a chance to win ;) I feel like that would be more concrete and something worth sharing over, but that's just my opinion.
That is super interesting thanks!
https://rorvswild.com
I was able to get to it, but limited feedback: https://www.loom.com/share/94fc0b17852143218fca674f306c34e3
Limited, still super useful and eye opening :) Thanks you very much for this!
Have you down on my list, have not forgotten, sorry for delay!
I image this is over, but I have to cross my fingers..
https://www.fixmybikeathome.com/
Follow-up thought: https://www.loom.com/share/87c67fb11b0641fdb27344431a8dbcc2
Here you go:https://www.loom.com/share/529541466e0343f29ce01453c58b66b4
I also have a follow-up thought coming up in a second..
Hi Gene,
I still need to do some adjustments, but I would love to hear your thoughts about the landing page of my project.
Hope its not to late. If it is, I totally understand :)
https://companio.io/
Thanks
Hi Guilherme, here are some thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/6fafefef3e954aa784e42e8c2a30cafb
Hey gene, thank you very much. Super useful feedback, i will try to address these topics that you highlighted, especially about pricing. Thanks :)
🙏Thanks for the kind words! Good luck to you! Reach out any time on Twitter @cogentgene
No not too late, sorry for delay, I will take care of this one ASAP!
Hi Gene! Thank you for your job.
I'd really appreciate your help for https://order.cubbit.io/product
Here are my thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/0cae09ee7b3441b69099b07c4e711d9d
Added you to my list, be back to you asap!
Would be awesome if you gave mine a look. Made in wix, no experience coding anything.
https://www.dutchtide.com
Sorry for the late delay again, here are my thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/4a52ec2cf6b54f03ae040b0b688c6dac
Added you, will get back to you asap!
http://luxtrim.com/ thank you Alex!!!
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/bb10b3bc0eb6428fa5faaf532b08e488
deregistration. de/en/
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/e7e242521da24337bc8bd2dc2c7f9a4a
Thank you very much for your feedback! Will will make some changes & improvements. Your hints are very helpful for this!
Hi Gene, Will gladly take you up on your offer - https://knwldg.io
Thanks
Looks like a neat product! https://www.loom.com/share/2d9c9928e9f84777bd011417e4b6365b
Here's mine: https://jessler.com/
Thanks Gene!
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/56b98b84fe0b478497e83386f6a7dd90
Great! I like the advice to 1) restructure the introudction text to be more direct about the benefits for users, 2) add extra CTA button below intro text.
Thanks!
Sweet, glad it was somewhat helpful! Let me know if you need anything ever. Can reach me on Twitter @cogentgene
Great initiative Gene!
Here's mine: myfirstyear.co
Thanks 🙌
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/638062080a904169ba0514628dd5f81c
This was awesome :)
You really hit a number of spots I'd have missed on my own. Truly invaluable. Will implement a number of recommendations.
Thank you Gene!
Sweet! Glad to be of some help! Good luck to you!
Hey Gene, this is very generous of you, we need help with this one: https://bystakk.com/ Thanks in advance :)
Here you go Nick: https://www.loom.com/share/2b26c38d3ff24a438bcae8a358464ace
Thank you Gene, I really appreciate the feedback, it was most helpful. I'll share the updated version soon. If you need help with anything, please let me know.
Hi Gene,
Can you please review
https://dblue.ai
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/69b82ebe0c864c2c84d41b09cbed33d9
Hi Gene, we just launched our landing page and would love your feedback: https://vistahq.io
Thanks in advance!
Hi Robert, here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/cc6bac8a2cea42e18f7606d5392df3f9
Awesome work, Gene! Thanks for the constructive criticism.
Hey gene,
I have started a new tiktok course and here is my landing page link - www.fondlinksedu.com
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/94e4af17db7f48449d8614938b60eea7
Thank you so much. https://toddmoses.com/
https://blog.swingpulse.com
Thank you.
Vid: https://www.loom.com/share/23dbdbe385c04b03b82e5fcf34d16f07
Thank you VERY much. It was useful for me. Ping me if you need any help (from a technical point of view, or else).
Thanks, man.
Thank you!
Hey Gene - would appreciate a review of www.cogsquared.com
Thanks
Hey, here is my video (heads up: I was very frustrated using this site haha) https://www.loom.com/share/94953836f6e742ca9cd9439699961914
Hi Gene - thanks for the feedback & totally understand the frustration! Lots of incredibly useful points made which i've tried to implement.
Thanks for taking the time - much appreciated.
Yeah no problem and sorry I got fussy haha! Out of frustration rises an improved version of our products ;) Let me know if you ever need any help with anything. Can find me on Twitter @cogentgene
This is Awesome! thanks, https://ourspark.me
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/0a84e4a35a5a4461a7dd04d9029b038a
Thanks for taking the time this was really insightful 🙌
Yeah no problem! let me know if you have any questions ever, can find me on twitter @cogentgene
Thanks for doing this! http://mytaskhero.com/
Alvaro, here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/1e06779aefaf4ca19ff959adad054a13
Gene, thank you very much for taking the time to make this review!
For anyone else reading this comment, I highly recommend you get a review from Gene.
We definitely agree with you and recognize that the landing page is not specifying if Hero is a Chrome Extension/plugin/native app. We'll fix it right away.
Thanks for the Product Hunt suggestions as well!
We are aware that Hero is kind of difficult to get right now. We also agree with you in the sense that whoever fills in the "Request access" must really have the problem. We have been pleasantly surprised by how many people have filled it :O
Thanks again! Cheers,
Alvaro
Awesome, glad I could be of some help!
Thanks for doing this Gene!
Would love some tips on how to improve https://letterbase.io.
Hi Richard, here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/f7fd99a8b72d467791484396d74f1906
Lovely tips, Gene! Thank you for doing this, it was really helpful.
No problem Richard! Feel free to reach out any time on Twitter if you need anything: @cogentgene
http://featuremonkey.com/
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/fcc3a47fa3df49c08ccef28f498ba7e5
Thank you. This was really helpful
No problem!
sweet, thanks! https://autonews.io
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/24a796d98ecf401590e95bc56a18eb02
Thanks a lot. All of the points you stated are great. Will definitely take them into account in next development.
Great to hear Pete!
Hey Gene, thanks for doing this! Took a look through your website, lots of great insights for this community.
Here's my companies website for a product concept we are launching soon: http://ledhouseplant.com/
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/b8e8075a1af64270a2da9bc83de0b00d
Thank you so much!! Really appreciate the effort and value the feedback.
My pleasure!
Passportlist.co
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/7fa01da703814cc6908ac5e78a9f2dbe
Thank you so much for doing this!
If you still have some time, I would love if you check out https://abtesting.ai
Cheers :)
I will get to this, sorry just backed up for a while with all the requests, I'll get you next first thing in the morning ;)
Thank you! I will be waiting for it :)
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/effbca739d47432f8e3638187cf45289
Very cool, thanks!
https://piano2notes.com
Not much in terms of feedback, your site felt pretty solid: https://www.loom.com/share/eb133620bae14985bd0e01d96d86dd8c
Thanks a lot for your feedback, Gene :)
Yeah no prob! Tool looks very useful! Keep in touch on Twitter if you need any help with anything! @cogentgene
This is super cool thanks! joincircle.app
Here you go Shawn: https://www.loom.com/share/bde53c51bfc14dc0ad09071adeb88fe5
Thanks for the feedback! Any thoughts on how to make it more clear that the product is a social platform where you can post videos?
What's the benefit of your social platform?
If you're still taking new projects :D
mowned.com - just published a new version!
demo account:
demo@mowned
demo
Thanks!
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/9ce5f87f6c9b4bcfac535e8965c89b39
Thank you very much for your time!
This is indeed a site "fun" project.
The idea is people create timeline with phones they owned, they can share them with their friends (will revise the text to clear up the things a bit - thanks!). And all the stats from the site are generated from showcases.
The trends and graphs you were looking can be seen in the demo showcase or any other profiles (eg: those featured). I will add a text near the demo profile screenshot, something like "see how your showcase can look".
The site niche is mobile freaks (i am one)
Also, what resolution are you using? The section with parallax phones from main page looks very bad. Also the main text from cover is not visible. I have some responsive issues it seems 😁
Ps: there was an expand action in time explorer. It's not that obvious, will have to redesign the whole header there.
Thanks again! Very good insights for a first visit!
Thanks for the extra details ;) I am on an iMac.
Cheers! & thanks!
Thanks in advance, let me know how I can help in any of your endeavors!
https://ontheshelfapp.com
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/d0c238250b3b4bd2bc0442f947fac976
Thanks for your time Gene, my site is https://pory.io 🙏
Awesome product!!! Here is my video: https://www.loom.com/share/7060b47953344f4fb55977dfcbec7e57
I forgot to mention in my video, maybe you can add a fixed header or something on every demo and have a button to say "use this template" or "start with this template". :)
thanks for taking the time to do that! I noticed everything looked a lot smaller on your monitor as well, so I'll look into it. Great points on not having a button in the pricing page to get started and the ability to upgrade once you've logged in.
Looking forward to see how you go when you get the time to create sites on it!
Glad to be of help! Yeah I will be checking this out when I find time ;)
Great! https://botmake.io 🤖
Thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/bd25d9a698724a7da9efaea26768b4a8
Thanks a lot for the review @genemachine definitely helpful feedback👍
Awesome! ;)
Thanks Gene, here it is https://horizontech.dev/
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/52f112f362284374b1811ff1cca55f84
Thanks.
No problem!
Amazing -- thank you for doing this!!
https://mutualbloom.com
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/035f8469cc4a49c7b203454ce70f1752
unbelievably helpful thank you!
My pleasure!
Oooh thank you! https://courses.codemochi.com/frontend-serverless-with-react-and-graphql/
Here you go Stephen: https://www.loom.com/share/3b68f427b92d440bb5f89ea4fcc8233f
So sorry I missed your reply for a few days but thank you so much for taking the time to create this video! It's very helpful to see how you went through and explained the thoughts running through your head because it made it clear that I need to clean a few things up to make it more crystal clear exactly what the value proposition is for this course I'm creating. Thanks Gene!
Hi Gene, really generous offer.
We just redid our site, would love for you to take a look :)
https://hexiconapp.com
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/8d69448ae9c54b0f9b10cc4b4c114c80
Gene, thank you so much for taking the time to make this video! You caught some very good things, we'll discuss and make some changes. Especially:
Large screen formats - good catch, there is too much white space, we will bring things in
Great idea about adding testimonials and reviews - we do have reviews but they are currently all hidden due to being in early access on google play.
TestFlight - definitely we see low rates of iOS installs, but that probably can't improve until full release :(
Email signup - we will make the copy clearer for sure, and maybe add a lead magnet
Nice!
UPDATE: Heading out for the night! I will get to everyone else tomorrow if I haven't gotten to you.
Feel free to keep submitting your requests. I will review ALL of them. Thanks everyone!
If you liked what you heard, please subscribe to my newsletter (growthinsider.co)
See you tomorrow!
Thanks a ton in advance, Gene ! mine is https://www.voicenatural.com
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/d1edc2d2f1844dbf83c3ef190c69ec7f
That was useful- @genemachine. Food for thought!
Np! I know some dropshipping places do really well and those are usually the ones that tend to focus on a handful of products but go super heavy on social proof, reviews, Instagram content etc. Good luck!
Hey Gene! Thanks for this offer!
Here's the URL: https://altar.io/ Any advice and insights you may have would be great!
Thanks!
Jamie, here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/b8c27b19a7524b10888b3ea98ba159e5
yes, please!! https://fixr.co/your-hub
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/90aebefd13c24c8bb36516f1bc93f7be
Thank you @genemachine . A very helpful insight - much appreciated!
My pleasure!
Great! https://inboxes.com
Hi Oron! Here are some thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/22a57d4eaf8c4a6d86e323058c0e0afd
Good stuff. Please have a look here https://pacemakerbot.com/
Michal, here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/9e35814fc4c3411cb379df13207a72b6
Thanks 😄 buildfaster.netlify.app
Here you go Brayden: https://www.loom.com/share/dd5d6f962e434b3c9c8547e3936b4f7b
Thank you so much! This is the help I've been looking for 😄
Awesome! Glad to be of some minor help :)
Thanks! It was more than "minor" though. It helped a lot.
I updated the index.html and the preview pages. It would be cool if you could say a sentence or two about what you think.
buildfaster.netlify.app
Hi,
I would really appreciate your feedback
https://tracktions.app/
Thanks
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/04fa3465a5084645aec15a4f5f243191
Thank you so much.
Really helpful and good feedback.
Now I have 9 things to improve :)
Awesome! Glad to be of some use ;)
Will do tomorrow ;)
Appreciate your initiative. I'm working on a new landing page -> https://remoteleaf.webflow.io
Follow-up thought: https://www.loom.com/share/ffb6aa4d50d444118d5973deb7b41538
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/de35cc3e123944cdbc448655711c8872
OMG, this is really awesome. Thank you so much for the detailed review and for your time to think through all the cases and report. I've not expected this at all.
Now, this weekend I'm going to sit and implement some of these feedbacks.
Nice! Good luck!
Thanks: https://plyian.com
I want to see if the update landing is better.
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/8dc95b6df05f4b1ba30c9a60a2986ae0
This is my landing page for hiring managers and recruiters in the tech hiring space: https://employbl.com/employers
Appreciate feedback for improvement :)
Connor, a few thoughts here: https://www.loom.com/share/eb68346480a3426d86c12d7dadf56111
Thanks @genemachine super honest and helpful. Really have kept the text minimum while building the product because still working on it and has been a bit slow going. Can tell I need to do a better job telling the story here!
Feedback notes:
How does it work?
How is it saving me money?
How is it saving me time?
Who is doing this?
What’s the process?
Establish credibility
Speak to the fact that recruiting fees are expensive
Why should they care? Why should they get notified?
What is your service? How do you provide it? Why is it different?
How is it beneficial to businesses?
What’s the angle here? Give them some details
What is your service?
Is anybody using it?
Make the business case for it!
Give them details
Hey Gene, thanks a lot for offering this feedback! I realize you're slammed with requests at this point, but if you've got the time I would love to get your feedback on my landing page https://nullbox.co and have you share that review on your website.
Here you go Chris: https://www.loom.com/share/b16de4990c88477197422266653d3921
Thanks Gene, this was so incredibly helpful. Even before you got to providing specific feedback I could immediately tell from watching you read the copy that it didn't do a good job of making it clear why you would want to use NullBox. That in of itself was so helpful. As the creator, I obviously know why I think people need it so I took that for granted and was too focused on talking about the service instead of the problems it solves.
I made note of all of your feedback and I'm so excited to implement it!
Awesome! I hope it was helpful and good luck on your product!
Hi Gene, would love your feedback on our consulting page!
https://www.prettyneat.io/
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/7aee7e7b8edc4c5ba59873e7e40c6ec2
Hey Gene - just wanted to thank you for your very helpful constructive criticism. We'll be prioritizing collecting some case studies, upping the interactivity on the hero section of the page, and making clearer our USP based on your feedback :)
Keep up the great work!
My pleasure! Look forward to seeing the updated pages! Please notify me when it's ready, I'd be happy to take another look for you.
Hi Gene,
I see you got a lot of requests, if you still have time I would appreciate some feedback on https://usertrack.net
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/490575d01e9e4eabb3d4eab54870c1ad
Thanks again for the amazing feedback!
Let me know if there's anything I can do for you (subscribe to your newsletter or follow you on your social networks)! 😊
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Wow, thank you a lot, that was really insightful!
Here's a summary of your notes, maybe it helps others:
So based on your video it confirmed to me that the landing page still has a lot of room for improvement. I knew of some of those problems, but maybe didn't think they were that important. I will definitely work on those seeing how much of an impact they actually have.
The idea to show the cost of other tools is a really good one, which I only recently considered!
I have one question:
My tool has multiple selling-points, all of which I consider equally important (privacy, cost, feature set). I know that ideally I would show a different landing page based on what the customer is searching for. My question: How do you decide what benefits to show if you don't know what the customer is looking for? Could it just display all of them? If you display all benefits above the fold, doesn't it make the product look too "scammy" or trying too hard to sell?
I would not worry about displaying everything above the fold.
Pick your strongest selling point - Why do people come to you / or should visit your tool? What's the BIGGEST problem you solve for them? Lead with this. Let the rest of the page sell on the other problems they have.
That's the issue in my case. Their biggest problem varies from individual to individual, and it could be:
So if the user came looking for "features" and I only promote "privacy" above the fold, they might bounce. Or maybe I'm underestimating the attention span of the users, maybe if I don't talk about something above the fold, they would still scroll and check whether my tool also solves their specific problem.
I quickly actually made some of the changes you mentioned, I think the first impression is a lot better now! https://www.usertrack.net/
I like it! I would move one of the testimonials right below the button at the top ;) Maybe match the style so it doesn't use the dark background, but sits nicely to complement the expected experience as soon as you load up the page.
In this case, what you would likely do is focus on bottom of the funnel content, then use that content to funnel people to a landing page specifically designed for that audience.
For example, if someone searches for heatmap software, you could write an article on all the benefits of heatmaps, then link to a page that puts heatmaps as the main selling point front and center.
Let me know if this makes sense or not.
I also think this would be the best way, as I mentioned before:
But for now I want to focus on the product and creating some tutorials before I go back to creating multiple landing pages.
I was hoping there was a quicker fix/solution. Probably better to delay it a bit and spend the time to properly implement targeted landing pages than adding more quick fixes now.
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scrapingdog.com
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/6a81e8406f9f41ad9452790217df75db
Well Explained. Thank you very much.
No problem!
Thanks!! https://chart-nerd.now.sh/
Fayeed, here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/fb53bb596fd6474ba91733fe565997b1
Wow!! Thanks for the feedback, I agree with you that the landing page doesn't explain the benefit better, also more charts right on the page would be better.
Again, Thanks.
No problem!
https://www.mydaily.email
thanks so much, great work!
Nuno, here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/adf5101c6e5041eba7eade82e8148915
I'd appreciate your feedback!
https://seodity.com
Thanks!
Hey Marcin, here's the vid: https://www.loom.com/share/73b628873f19494581e281e5dba7c4d3
Sounds great! https://codecks.io
Here are my thoughts, hope it helps! https://www.loom.com/share/ae00c7b4551f4512811f7bd46980ae94
Much appreciated. Thanks!
No problem!
Amazing 🥇https://streakoid.com
Reece, here are my thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/b3a801bb800d44548e44eef373cb9cf1
Very interesting, thank you 👍
sure thing!
Looks great :) I've worked with designer on my landing page, so would appreciate any feedback: https://pingr.io
The only thing I cannot manage properly is pricing block, this one I don't like
I just realized your tool was actually right.. and the non-www version on my site is not working! Doh! I have to fix this.. so disregard that part in the video ;) Your tool actually solved something for me haha!
yeeey! I've just wrote you the same on twitter :D Since www is kind of different domain, so yeah, it's important to fix this :)
That's why on the landing page it didn't work - because of time out. But I should probably handle this case too, since I thought like it's a quick tool for working urls, but indeed not user friendly
Also I think I'll add this super-user-friendly thing: if the domain doesn't work without www but works with www, I'll notify user somehow :)
Yes! This is a good idea ;) Glad to see my incompetence translated to a useful feature hahaha
Hey Victor, here are my thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/25262069eac0459eb80c8cbcf0896647
Hey, thank you so much! I dropped you a line on twitter, since something's weird going on with growthinsider =\
Count me in! https://angora.me
Done: https://www.loom.com/share/c278ba2220f5483c96fd90c7427f62f1
Thanks, @genemachine.
YW!
Hey Gene,
Thanks for your offer!
I would like to hear your opinion on https://writing9.com
Serhii, here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/7536afc85a5549609a3fa494497ac109
Wow, thanks for your feedback!!
Much appreciated
This is awesome, let me know how can I improve with upstamps.com
Hi Vitor, got the vid here: https://www.loom.com/share/fb8e0bd7ac8749dfb96f97693544c2d5
You are the best, thank you very much for your time and feedback, it was very honest and it makes sense. It makes sense to put some proof of the social proof to the problem on the home page. I'll see if I can get something interactive on the home page to show visitors how it works. The part of the product tour really makes sense if the visitor never goes there it is a pity, I will see if I can put it on the home page. Thank you, I now have some work ahead of me 😂. Best regards, take care. If you need anything count on me.
Glad I could be of some use!
Hi Gene - thanks for the offer!
I would appreciate your feedback:
http://waitlist.sideschool.com/
Thanks,
Alex
Alex! Here we go: https://www.loom.com/share/e6baa17a3d2346bf91c633d16f033df8
Great job, Gene! I really like your positivity and honesty. The page is very much work in progress as of now, your points were all valid and will be tackled next! Thanks and good luck with your project!
Thank you, I hope i was not too harsh. I think you are heading in the right direction!
I’d love to have my landing page grilled! Completely ok with you posting it on your page as well
https://www.solfej.io/
Got you written down thanks
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/794f618acd7d4d288ff2f5afdaf66311
Awesome! great feedback. will definitely be adding social proof, and taking your other feedback into account.
Awesome!
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Hi Rico, here are some thoughts: https://www.loom.com/share/440c0476f9ea4e6dbd0afaf419884e7c
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I hope it wasn't too harsh! I only mean well!!
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Haha, oh no! ;)
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Follow-up thought here: https://www.loom.com/share/ad8f8411091541ca8cd5edf769ecd333
Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/0e15b0d1928544feb070776305c2696e
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What's up?
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Not interested ;)
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Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/22400206d2ef4c348902cf42d6e98ee2
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My pleasure!
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Anna, here we go: https://www.loom.com/share/5660d890e57e49608f445e903a5cd7cf
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Ah I see. Yeah, the page did not make this very clear (at least at a quick glance). Glad I could provide some outside perspective ;)
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Here you go: https://www.loom.com/share/c016d22167df4ae08963140cd0512730
Thank you!
What screen resolution do you use haha, didn't expect it to look that weird
I'm on an iMac ;)