How’s your end of the year looking like? Have a little time to spare but not sure what to do with it? Or maybe you’re just taking a rest day. Perhaps this can be the right time to review my landing page for my SaaS and i will review back yours.
https://klosify.com/ltd
The h1 says:
I doubt it very highly that it's the first.
I like the little animation image but why not just show a preview of your app/platform
I like where you show your product features with a clear screenshot 👍 the section above this one however is text heavy and I don't think a lot of people will stop and read every single "feature" with that much text
I also don't understand the section after...Easily Track order..
you decided to away from the Text-->Image pattern (also known as Z pattern) and now you're just doing full width paragraphs features?
Your page goes on forever...I scrolled towards the bottom and I saw the pricing - didn't read half of what you wrote - because it was TOO MUCH.
I suggest if you have so much to showcase, why not just do a video and ONLY highlight the features that bring instant benefits to your target audience?
Imagine you were selling a car, what would you highlight first?
The safety, the comfort and the various use-cases of the car - you don't start talking about how good the lights are, or how durable the wheels are....
think similarly !
Thank you very much. those are solid feedback. i will work on