I'm about to do another batch of landing page changes to explain the product better. Help me see more!
Hello,
I'm preparing my product for a launch on PH, but also to have it ready to show to some businesses if they are interested.
The thing about Bee Informed is that it has two parts. Business owners who will create content and end users, who will consume the content.
Somehow, I always mix those two. My goal is to focus landing page to business owners only. What's in there for them
Bee Informed offers a newsletter-alike experience without providing emails or any contact data or creating profiles. Still, you can receive offers you're interested in. Business can expand their target audience by providing this alternative way of getting information. How many times were you shopping and someone jumped in asked to fill the form to get the loyalty card, or provide an email to get latest updates. You might still be interested in the updates and offers but you don't want to provide your data. It's important that you are the one in control of that relation.
Page is here: https://www.beeinformed.app
Feel free to drop questions or concerns what you would like to know AS A BUSINESS OWNER. What is unclear to you here.
Many thanks!
Hi there!
I think giving out specific examples of use cases would be clearer than a generic one. Like how would a regular store, restaurant, etc would implement these. Target your target audience's use cases directly. Make them 110% clear to them.
Hey Wit,
I'll try to make it that way
Can you check it now?
https://beeinformed.app
Hi Bruno,
The landing page itself is pretty clear, and I think you solve a great use case for business owners, users ARE hesitant to give out emails.
However, as you say you also have the users who want to get something in return, and that's where I don't fully understand your proposition.
As a business owner, once I have read your page and understood your proposition, I tried scanning the QR code in the header, which takes me to the app store. That's where you lose me.
There are plenty of stats showing that most people download apps and delete them within minutes. As a business owner, I want to know how you are going to make sure that doesn't happen.
Hopefully that helps!
Sam
Can you check is it any better now?
https://beeinformed.app
Hi Sam,
thanks for your input.
Thats also one thing to consider (the user part, keeping the mobile app)