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I'm building my early-access landing page. Am I missing something? πŸ€·β€β™‚οΈ

Hey IH!

Recently, I've been building a simple landing page for users to signup for early access for a quick and effective Reflective Journaling app.

Everyday, take only 30 seconds to record:

  • What you glowed at πŸ˜„
  • And what you can grow at 🌱

I want to make sure I nail down all the piece needed in order to create something attractive/and optimized for conversions.

Here is a screenshot of what I have so far:

Screenshot of landing page

Any feedback on the copy/layout/design would be awesome. I want to begin this journey off on the right foot. Starting with pre-marketing my app! πŸŽ‰

Thanks for your help!

on February 2, 2021
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    I just put up my pre-launch page for a product I am working on as well. In getting ready for that I read that a video sometimes helps explain. Personally I had to look up the term reflective journaling - so there might be an educational need.
    Also something I am considering is giving the people signing up something of value (in your case maybe it’s a printable template) now.

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      Nice idea! Thanks for your help.

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    i like the design πŸ”₯ especially the purple sign-up button!

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      Thanks πŸ‘

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    From a quick glance it looks like a great looking landing page!

    The thing I might say though is, when saying 'reflect on what you've glowed, and what you can grow at', you might want to better convey what this actually means. I know that it sounds nice but people really don't like figuring things out themselves!

    I think the heading and sub-heading need to better convey the actual value of reflective journaling as well as how you create that value via the app.

    Here is also a really great guide on landing pages that I saw not that long ago that you might find useful: https://marketingexamples.com/conversion/landing-page-guide?utm_campaign=3-2-1%3A 3 Business Ideas%2C 2 Marketing Tips%2C %26 1 Inspiring Quote (YusZNV)&utm_medium=email&utm_source=Starter Story&_ke=eyJrbF9jb21wYW55X2lkIjogIkpjaGtpdiIsICJrbF9lbWFpbCI6ICJoZW5yeS5yYXdvcnRoQGdtYWlsLmNvbSJ9

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      Thanks @hyraw! I see what you mean. I'll be sure to work on that. And thanks for the resource too!

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        No problem at all!

        How are you currently getting potential customers to your landing page? I made a guide showing people how to validate ideas and even get pre-signups before you're even finished the product. Would be happy to share with you!

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          Well, right now, I've worked on validated the idea here on IH and people seemed to like the idea. I still have to gather potential users and create+launch the MVP.

          You can reach me at: brayden45.dev@gmail.com
          Thanks!

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            Yeah nice, that's a great start. Reddit is a pretty perfect place to validate almost any idea. My team actually validated an idea in the mental health/wellbeing area on reddit that I use as a case study in the guide!

            I sell the guide online but always happy to help people at the start of their journeys :) I'll email you now!