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I'm hoping to get feedback on my landing page for my newsletter.

So I'm building a free newsletter that I'm launching soon, the landing page is done, and its basically ready to launch, but I wanted to get some feedback on my landing page. I'd love some input and any suggestions on what I can improve.

link here: theslice.co

on May 30, 2020
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    Center the text above the email input box

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    First of all, the layout feels odd. Did you check other landing pages? Normally there is a title, with a sub-title, then some visual and the CTA, all before the fold. I would take some good examples and use a similar layout. Maybe like: https://trends.co

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      Thanks! I appreciate the input. I touched up on it today and took your advice in account🙏🏻

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        Much better, I would keep everything on the same page and not link somewhere else (“read more”). And fill it with more details, examples, testimonials, etc. show me how a newsletter might look like.