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Hi @LucaV,

Overall the page looks nice. Here are some thoughts I had:

The logo on the top left looks like a button, not like a logo
The font that you chose for the headers is very wide. My eyes have to travel a long distance across the screen to read just a few words. I'd choose something more narrow
The header has 2 competing buttons - "book a call" on the top right, and "get started" in the center. I'd get rid of the top right.
The center CTA does not lead me to any action, just scrolls to the next section. So if you got me interested, you just lost me because I can't leave my details or anything.
"Book a call" is too much commitment at this point. Both for you and the prospect. I think a short form with name, email, wesite, and "What are you looking to get help with?" may work better for you. Tell users "leave your details and I'll get in touch"
The section with the logos of slack and trello looks a little messy. It has no structure and it's not clear what Slack and Trello have to do with UI/UX. Figma and Webflow - I understand
The bullets on the right I'd turn into "our services" section with 3 cards.
You are a one-man agency, and you ask people to trust you with their UI/UX needs, and pay you a not-so-small amount every month. I think you need to help them build trust first:
a. You need to put your face and your story on the web site. Who are you, what is your "I believe", did you study design anywhere, what do you love doing...
b. You have "my work" section, but it's not really linking to anywhere. So I can't see any of it.
c. Maybe offer an alternative option to hire you by-the-hour so I can start small and decide if I want to go with the monthly plan
on-hover (only 10 custoemrs...) is not a good UX. It's not mobile friendly, not SEO friendly, and I have to work in order to get the content. Try moving this content the the section that you tell about yourself, this is part of your "I believe"...
Put your email address or contact form at the bottom
The "get 50% off..." belongs with the pricing. You show the price per month, and next to it "50% off your first month"
"Would you be one of the first 10 customers?" - this shows that you don't have any customers yet. I wouldn't write this.
"Book a call now and explain me your project" - bad grammar..

Good luck

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I really love the main font! It really stands out. I have some suggestions for tweaking the content. There are some grammar and spelling mistakes.

By joining UI Booster, you will receive full support for your digital project needs. All of the designs will be created by myself to ensure high quality and fast delivery. I work with a maximum of 10 subscribers at a time to maintain the best premium service.

Hope this helps!

behn

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4 years ago
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  Hi @behn! yes its my last favorite gfont for headers and titles! And thanks a lot for copy suggestions, I'm not English native that's why I usually outsourcing the contents, ora ask help in great community like here 🙏
  
  Luca Vercellio
  
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  4 years ago
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Hi @LucaV,

Overall the page looks nice. Here are some thoughts I had:
1. The logo on the top left looks like a button, not like a logo
2. The font that you chose for the headers is very wide. My eyes have to travel a long distance across the screen to read just a few words. I'd choose something more narrow
3. The header has 2 competing buttons - "book a call" on the top right, and "get started" in the center. I'd get rid of the top right.
4. The center CTA does not lead me to any action, just scrolls to the next section. So if you got me interested, you just lost me because I can't leave my details or anything.
5. "Book a call" is too much commitment at this point. Both for you and the prospect. I think a short form with name, email, wesite, and "What are you looking to get help with?" may work better for you. Tell users "leave your details and I'll get in touch"
6. The section with the logos of slack and trello looks a little messy. It has no structure and it's not clear what Slack and Trello have to do with UI/UX. Figma and Webflow - I understand
7. The bullets on the right I'd turn into "our services" section with 3 cards.
8. You are a one-man agency, and you ask people to trust you with their UI/UX needs, and pay you a not-so-small amount every month. I think you need to help them build trust first:
  a. You need to put your face and your story on the web site. Who are you, what is your "I believe", did you study design anywhere, what do you love doing...
  b. You have "my work" section, but it's not really linking to anywhere. So I can't see any of it.
  c. Maybe offer an alternative option to hire you by-the-hour so I can start small and decide if I want to go with the monthly plan
9. on-hover (only 10 custoemrs...) is not a good UX. It's not mobile friendly, not SEO friendly, and I have to work in order to get the content. Try moving this content the the section that you tell about yourself, this is part of your "I believe"...
10. Put your email address or contact form at the bottom
11. The "get 50% off..." belongs with the pricing. You show the price per month, and next to it "50% off your first month"
12. "Would you be one of the first 10 customers?" - this shows that you don't have any customers yet. I wouldn't write this.
13. "Book a call now and explain me your project" - bad grammar..
Good luck
Danbars

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4 years ago
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  Hi @Danbars, thanks for the suggestions, appreciate that. Actually most of that are already on progress and I will update the page soon.
  
  Luca Vercellio
  
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  4 years ago
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