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I'm not all that happy with any part of my landing page but I don't know what part of it I should focus on improving. Any ideas are welcome.

I'm a technical person, design and copywriting aren't really in my comfort zone but I've been slowly improving it (if you think this is bad you should've seen my previous attempts). I would love some feedback on this landing page to know what to focus on. Thank you for your time

The page is
https://documentationlab.com

on June 1, 2023
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    It looks like you are selling to a technical audience. Outside from your content being a bit wordy (you can shorten the text copy), your company is fine.

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    Looks good. In my opinion, I would focus on the feature that automatically generates documentation from code and the document chat. I think those are your game changing features.

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      I think you're right. I will change it