I recently finished my site and I'm getting closer to launching and I'd love an extra set of eyes on my site.
I'm launching a homemade granola site, where the ingredients are locally sourced. Specifically the honey, maple syrup, and oats.
Something someone mentioned is taking about why people should buy my product. So I think I'm going to move the about down and put some bullet points about the benefits of locally sourced and supporting local farms.
Also as soon as I have some reviews I'll be adding that to the site as well.
Any insight would be extremely helpful.
UPDATE: I made a version 2 post - https://www.indiehackers.com/post/granola-copy-version-2-fffb7c8f71