I'm yet to be called after what I did, I need some feedback

I think the overall placement of elements is fine, but here is my feedback:

• The colors are too bright and in your face. It kind of hurts my eyes to look at that bright of colors.
• The input field boxes are too basic/off the shelf. Try style them.
• The school icon is kind of elementary (no pun intended). I'd either add a photo or replace it with a better icon.
• I'm not sure what the school + school icon have to do with the login page.

Keep practicing,

Right now the design does not look centered on my phone, but I do see that you kept responsiveness in mind. Depending on the agency the overall design might look a little basic (take this with a grain of salt, 'basic' is very subjective. in this case I mean that this design looks a bit amateuristic compared to what's out there).

Keep practicing, consider redesigning some ope source stuff!