Improved our producthunt demo video with feedbacks from IH community

Hey guys, a couple of days ago I asked you all to give us some feedback on our demo video for the upcoming launch.
https://www.indiehackers.com/post/feedback-on-producthunt-demo-video-5f1bcc4840

While the feedback was majorly negative, it was the best thing that happened - because it gave us an opportunity to correct it before we actually launch.

We have now come up with the second version:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lDx2muEW3kA

Looking forward to hearing your feedback about it.