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In 5 seconds…can you answer these questions?

http://thequillapp.com/

Hey all,

I created a landing page for the web app using Carrd. Looking at it for 5 seconds, can you:

Can you tell who it’s for?
Can you tell what the problem is?
When could you tell, and why? (H/t @ekaterinahoward)

Thanks!

submitted this linkon July 18, 2022
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    TBH At first I wasn't sure if it was for real estate agents or purchasers.
    The problem is that its a nightmare to get offers signed on time.

    Once I scrolled half way through though those boxes made it clear!

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    Problem: sending & e-signing offers
    Target audience: real estate agents

    When it becomes clear: about 60% through the page (MLS mention), until then not quite sure that it's for real estate.

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      Thanks! Your last comment about when it became clear (and why) makes the world of a difference - I’m going to update the post and add that question.

      Any specific suggestions around that?

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        Thinking in terms of a 5-seconds test might help -> if your readers could only look at the page for 5 seconds, what do you absolutely need them to remember?

        (Will probably involve answers to the questions: What does it do? Who is it for? What problem does it solve? or Which outcome does it help achieve?

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          The 5 second test - thank you!