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In need for some Feedback

Hello Indie-Hackers,
we are a QA-Company for large IT-Projects and our growth is outpacing our team capacity. To tackle this challenge we created a landing page.

How do you like the Landing Page? What would you do better?
The goal of the campaign is for the user to book a call.

https://join.onit.eu

on February 21, 2023
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    • You have a double CTA ( which just scrolls the page down )
    • The title is a bit confusing. Put the focus on what the potential applicant is here for. Also if you care about SEO, don't put the header in a p-tag.
    • The see less/see more button is redundant. Just show the benefits you offer. Also your benefits are a bit too abstract; they raise more questions than they answer.
    • Offer different variants of contact. Your applicant may or may not want to have a call immidiately, maybe he prefers a written medium like email.
    • I think the "start your future" is a bad line. It's really vague and a bit pushy. Maybe use something more casual like "get to know us" or something like that.
    • There is some basic info I would want to know as applicant. What do you do as a company? What are you looking for? What does a typical day look like? Do I qualify? Why would I apply to your company specifically?
    • You mention "fellow travellers". Is the applicant expected to travel? This may be considered a pro by some and a dealbreaker by others.

    Hope it helps :).

    PS: Nerd remark. I had to think of angulars OnInit hook, when I saw your company name haha.

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    I am giving feedback for the following URL: onit.eu (assuming that link given in the description was a mistake).

    Your front landing page needs to be changed. You have testimonials that are credited to Project Management.

    You should create more content around your expertise - preferably with video content so you can drive more demo calls to you. It helps to have a Calendly integration so you can get more demo calls for your service.