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Is it clear what my product does? I think this is my first landing page

Site page: https://lxi.ai/

I've built a lot of sites but never one which such an explicit landing page so I feel a little lost. Feel free to absolutely roast the landing page :)

on March 17, 2021
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    I really like the minimalistic look. And all the margins and stuff are perfect. Also the mobile version is perfect.

    But I'm not sure how good would it convert. Usually people don't react good on sites without graphic :(

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      Thanks, graphics seems to be the consistent advice I've been getting!

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        Yeah, that's kind of sad that this doesn't work. I really enjoy minimalistic sites like this :)

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    Not enough graphics, so feel like too much text...

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      Yes that reminds me to finish the demo video!

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    Looks great, even on mobile. Great job!

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      Thank you! I should also thank tailwind css too :)

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        Tailwindcss is the best!

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    Hi, I love how clean your landing page looks! A couple of feedback here.

    1. Headline/subheadline:

    It’s still unclear what your product is and who is it for. What do you mean by Bookmarks? What is a bookmark graveyard and why is that not good? It’s very vague now.

    Are these mostly for students? I understand tech products can be for everyone, but who is the main target audience? You may call them out.

    1.1) Strong CTA above the told to capture prospects.

    I see both register and login above the fold. This increases friction for someone to sign up easily.

    Could you just have someone’s email for them to get started? CTA = Organize my bookmarks for free... Form field = Enter your Enail address.

    That is if you have a freemium or a way to let users test

    1.2) the current hero image / graphic doesn’t help explain what your product does. It doesn’t show the benefits either.

    An easy way to overcome this would be a GIF to show how easy this works. Or you can record a quick explainer video.

    1. What’s the benefit? It’s not clear how this will help me. The page doesn’t reflect that you understand my day to day struggles. Need to call it out here.

    2. more social proof and case studies needed. This will help me trust you and also understand whether it’s a fit for me. For example, if your target audience are tech executives, then get more testimonials from tech execs. Ensure the testimonials are also aligned. For example, if you say your product is easy to use, then ensure you have a number of testimonials saying how easy your product is to use.

    3. great FAQ!

    Some of the pointers above are addressed here. But best to expand them within their own sections. A “how it works” section, “A comparison to alternatives” section. Etc.

    Alright, that’s some high level feedback. Let me know if this helps.

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    Minimal to the extreme and I love it! Big fan of B&W!

    I'm wondering if you can take 1 little step further to show us how does the product look? @devin132