Is it too technical?
Hey guys! Just launched our new product - Drive Password. A password manager entirely based on Google Drive.
Here is the website - https://drivepassword.com
The initial feedback about our landing page is that it might be a bit too technical.
I would love to get your feedback if this is the case. What do you think should be improved?
It is a little bit technical for the average user. I was more confused by the "based on Google Drive" - I thought that meant it used the same type of technology as Google Drive uses to store passwords. It wasn't until father down the page that I realized what that meant. It might be clearer to say something like "secured by Google Drive" or something like that.
Appreciate it! :) Really valuable feedback!
Keep it really simple and focused. A lot of the content could be kept to landing pages about that specific feature.
Noted! Thanks! :)