Is my community platform LP clear enough?

I just created a landing page for our platform which is a tool for community entrepreneurs, that enables them to monetize while giving value to the community.
I'm not sure that the landing page messaging is clear enough and I'd love to hear your thoughts about it.

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      I tried to narrow it.
      Can you please tell me your screen's resolution?
      I really appreciate it

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          Thanks mate,
          it's fixed now I hope...

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              But did you understand what the platform is about? I mean message-wize

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                Yeah its pretty clear, I think you have to A/B test the best headlines.

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    I'd say it's not clear what is your product?

    A brand new community platform?
    An addon to other community platforms?

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      Hi thanks!
      I actually realized that there's not enough info on the landing page so we just refer to our main site now - www.comonetize.me
      And thanks for the question, I'll try to add the info.

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