Is my landing page clear enough?
Hi indiehackers,
I'm working on a slack app that is designed for remote workers. The purpose of the app is to make life easier when it comes to cook at home. It helps you find recipes and thanks to Amazon Fresh API to automatically add to your list all the ingredients and amount
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Hey Alin, overall a good idea and I like the design.
What I would change is to make it more clear that this assistant is a slack application.
Also the quality of the pictures is not good enough I think. The font make it hard to read.
Thanks for feedback! I made changes to the landing page based on the feedback given here. What do you think?
Whoa nice!
This is a huge difference and a lot better.
Thanks for taking my feedback serious. ;)
Nice and clear design. It was easy to understand the concept. I like that it focuses on a specific group.
the description is a bit lengthy and has some jargon. I feel that using "use natural language" for instance is unnecessary. Go for marketing language instead. Also focus on the idea of remote workers. At first I was like "who would use this app at work" and "why would it be integrated into slack" but then when I read the remote workers mention at the bottom of the page it all made sense.
Best of luck to you :)
Thanks a lot for your feedback. I will iterate and comeback with the modified version. Is this something you would use?
While it's pretty clear at first glance, I feel that a lot of the text is too verbose and can be summarized even further. The headline is quite a mouthful too:
Why not just go with:
?
I have to change the copy and make it more concise. Thanks for your suggestion!
simple and clear - nice :)
The only improvement I'd suggest is, you're dealing with food - which is a huge industry, just check out all the cooking shows. They all are driven by sight and smell of good looking food, so perhaps some better food graphics.
You're right about that. I will make changes. Thanks for your input.
Really liked your landing page, comments and suggestions below:
+1 message understood (your app rocks man, pretty cool!)
+1 design is cool and fresh!
Small typos, like "assistent" on the footer.
Suggestions:
"Yummy recipes a slack command away!"
I would be intrigued and interested on reading more!
P.S.: I am finishing my website too, it'd be great if you could have a look to my website/service and provide some feedback too! Thanks a lot in advance!!! 🙂
Thanks for the feedback. I'd love to take a look at your website/service and provide feedback. Hit me with the link.
https://messengersellwebsite-staging.herokuapp.com/
Key points for me:
Thanks man, I appreciate it! 🙌
Here you go:
What is my service about?
Is about creating an e-shop through your platform to sell stuff easier.
Does my text need copy review?
Feedback: I understood what is your service about after I watched the video which is a bit lengthy, I guess the golden standard is under 60 seconds.
Also, the clip from "1 Goodbye, complex platforms!" could be broken in 4 clips, 1 for every step presented. It's easier for me to play which one I want without having to wait to get again to the step I missed or I did not fully understand.
Is not clear how can I integrate with your service if I already have an e-commerce store.
Also, all the social use cases from the hero section are not very clear, at least to me.
If you have any other questions, just shoot.
Hey everyone, I made changes to the landing page based on your feedback. What do you think?