Is my launch video 'sexy'? (it's only 26 seconds)

It took 20sec for me to understand what you're selling. Most people won't see it until the end.

How about delivering your proposition value in the first 5 seconds "3 book summaries per day so you get the value without the hassle", then go on to show examples of dope books?

Also you mention a mammoth but never show one. I wish there were one cool mammoth with reading glasses with a book in his hand.

Last word of advice: Don't spend 3 weeks redoing the video. Make it super basic, quick, the PH crowd as seen it all.

My 2 cents :)

Catchy music ! The phrase "We do the hard work for you" feels off to me and the value proposition is late as pointed out by others but also sudden. Why would I want a book summary? Is a book summary worth it ?

How about an enticing phrase saying that most books can be boiled down to a few ideas and you will be delivering those?

Best of luck with your launch!

First impression, I think it uses way too much stock footage. You're selling this product to the PH crowd, even though it's 26 seconds I doubt people will watch it till the end.

Now, I've had a look at your product and those little clips you produce on Twitter do a much better job at saying what your product does. They also look quite polished as well.

This is what I'm referring to: https://twitter.com/ChattyMammoth/status/1456478882895388673?s=20

Personally, I'd structure the video by first talking about the problem (which you're doing in the video) and then showing some examples.

It's nice and gets the message across.

I'd say don't worry on making it perfect -- it's definitely a good start, and you'll get better in time.

P.S. This is a filmora template, right?

Like the music! Be sure to use curly quotes—“” and ‘’, not "" and ''. I like the overall style, but the last end card feels out of place

I like it, it's clear what your're trying to sell, not sure how, but it is engaging, just a little pixeled