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Is my product communicated well through my landing page?

Just published my landing page and wanted to know if you guys understand my product.

Link: https://www.fruitbowl.io/

Keen to hear your thoughts!

on July 1, 2020
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    Some part looks good- like “how it works” and the idea “in one click”. The big problem I see that it is not clear who is your target audience, everyone with all this tasks? Too broad, need to define your target audience more accurately, who is experiencing this problem all time? Focus on them. Create a clear value proposition for them

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      Thanks for the notes, really appreciate them!

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    Its not very clear to me exactly what you are providing, you appear to integrate with stripe, I think there is room to make your proposition more obvious.

    Might be just me but your subtitle doesnt read as nice, I had to read until the end of the line to correctly parse it.

    You have a few minor spelling issues: https://app.pagewatch.dev/5fc7b404e7d91603a300cd8d340fff92c2ce4960/dashboard

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      Thanks for your notes, im working on making the message much clearer!

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    I like the "How does it work" section on your site. Maybe work on the following copy a littler more.

    "Invoice paid, contract signed and Client Slack channel created. All in one click."

    Also not sure if I couldn't do this using Zapier ...

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      Hey thanks for the feedback - going to start improving that bit.

      Also, there probably is a workaround but it can get very messy & complex