3
11 Comments

Is our tiny landing page informative enough?

I think it's lightweight & informative, but maybe it's too lightweight for a landing page? What do you think?

Personally I'd love to keep it within the fold, I don't want to fill a scrolling page with unnecessary content (but maybe you guys know better?)

URL:https://payablelink.com/

Thanks in advance!

on November 28, 2019
  1. 4

    Fix background image position and the text.. some of the text isn't visible as both, the text and background image's cartoon is white.
    Solution: move text a little bit up and right.

    1. 1

      Thanks, I have fixed those issues. Appreciate the help.

  2. 3

    what is this about?
    why should i use this instead of just going to stripe?
    what problem do you solve?
    who are you? no disclaimer, no terms, no legal notice, no privacy policy, no cookie policy, no contact form, etc. ...
    what does it actually do? does it host credit card forms? is it an api? what can i do with it?

    I also agree with @AndrewKamphey, there is no trigger on why users should sign up and what benefit they have by doing so ...

    1. 2

      Yes, I second all of this feedback.

    2. 2

      This comment was deleted 4 years ago

  3. 2

    who is it for? what pain point is it solving? Just saying the solution might not entice anyone to try it unless they came here from somewhere else knowing to sign up.

  4. 1

    This comment was deleted 4 years ago

    1. 1

      Hi @Primer sorry about that, can you try registering again by clicking 'Login' at the top right of the website? If you have an issue would you mind sending me a screenshot? My email is tomas@vtwo.ie

      1. 1

        This comment was deleted 4 years ago

        1. 1

          Don't worry the irony was not lost on me! :) noted.

          1. 1

            Register button added. Form Validation improved. Changed the workflow to allow users to sign up before creating a link as per your suggestion. Thanks again @Primer

            1. 1

              This comment was deleted 4 years ago

  5. 2

    This comment was deleted 4 years ago

    1. 1

      Hey, I never seen TillyPay before, we do offer some of the same services, but we also offer a file escrow whereby a freelancer can hand over files and ensure they get paid before the customer receives them.

      1. 1

        This comment was deleted 4 years ago

  6. 2

    This comment was deleted 6 years ago

    1. 1

      Thanks, I have fixed those issues. Appreciate the help!!

  7. 2

    This comment was deleted 6 years ago

    1. 1

      Hi Tony, we've been working on this for about a year, building & validating with reference customers. Thanks for your feedback, I'm making some changes now based on your input.