Is this a good mobile first experience for a landing page?
https://mobile.swipetest.xyz/harley1
https://mobile.swipetest.xyz/product
What do you guys think of the above two 👆🏽👆🏽? (Best viewed on a smartphone) Are there any other platforms offering great mobile first design/experience for landing pages ?
Do leave your input in the comments !
They don't change for landscape mode
I hate video autoplay on mobile, you should assume I might be on expensive cellular/data restricted plan and that would make me close it immediately and also assume I have sound muted so you should offer subtitles
Ah ok thanks for the feedback !
Social media apps have trained us to swipe the screen up using our thumbs. With the Harley page, you're asking me to now swipe across to the left with no idea what to expect when I swipe. I agree with the other comment about the auto play video. Not a good idea on mobile.
Design aside, the copy is vague and uninspiring. The first line of copy reads "your ticket to freedom" which is overused and not clear. Is it a raffle? Is it a contest? Then the next bit of copy is "$3200 parallel twin ride away". I have no idea what that means. I have no reason to swipe anywhere but away from the page.
Thanks for the feedback ! I'll keep that in mind for future iterations.