Is this landing page clear enough?
I had this idea for vibits.co not long ago. I put together a draft landing page with brizy.
I haven't decided on the specific target market for it yet or the actual pricing yet, so I have done only minor outreach for it so far.
What do you think could be improved on this landing page?
Awesome idea. And based on a pricing, quite lucrative one!
But I think video and pricing would be enough. It's obvious what you do, so why even bother to describe why somebody need it. If they do, they know it already!
IMHO, your video is kinda not professional enough to ask for 4k$
Oh yea, definitely! I am planning on having 2 different examples of how the visuals would look for each of them. That way people can decided which one is more worth it for them.
The starter one is ment to be simpler and the "pro" one with a lot more motion graphics etc. depending on the style that fits. I'm not even sure if I should name the plans like that. Maybe I should give them a name that explains that a bit better.
Hi Kevin,
Really cool business idea, certainly a valuable service to offer.
I think overall your site looks pretty good but something that stood out to me is I feel like the first 3 sections of your site are very similar/maybe a bit repetitive?
I think the first two sections explain pretty clearly that you are breaking up longer videos into smaller content more suitable for various social networks.
Maybe replace the "cast multiple lines with the same content" section with some information which drives home the added value your clients will receive. You could highlight the time your clients will save using your service, how they can grow their audience or gain more clients.
An example of this could be something like "Most businesses spend over 30 hours a month editing social media content. Get your time back and get back to doing what you do best, growing your business!"
Id also suggest maybe adding some differentiation factors to the site which could highlight why you are the best option in the market. For example if you offer a fast turn around time, if you have experience editing or selecting viral content.
Best of luck with the project!
Thanks for the feedback! I was just thinking of that while going over it yesterday. I am working on a test case study and see what the end results affect performance. I was thinking that showcasing that too could be a great to show extra value and not only the time saved. But before I have that ready, I think it would be a good idea to try that.
Hello Kev,
First thing I noticed is that you need bigger text size almost on each section (including menu), less spaces between sections, and try to connect the elements together, they look too separated from each other.
Thank you! I'll look into it. What device were you on?
I checked it on MacBook Pro. If you need help let me know.
Pretty good landing page, I have one small suggestion:
Add an illustration with full width between the key message and "Start Now".
The key message is clear, but don't know how it works, so it would be perfect if you placed an imagery/video illustration to help readers get it in 2 seconds, it will drive high click rates of "start now" IMO
Tried adding a couple of changes. Would love to hear your thoughts if you get the chance to check it out.
Looks good!
Thanks! I agree, I've thought that it would be good to have that, I just haven't yet.
i am ignoring the black demo line. It looks fine but headline can be improved. It should appeal to the customer in the first line or make him/her curious to look further. Current headline doesn't do either until you go to subheading "Creating content for so many platforms is time consuming and complicated" which hits the pain point.
Definitely! Thanks for the feedback!
Love the idea!
There are quite a few bright colors so I was a bit distracted. The visualization would be much clearer if it uses an actual video as an example.
I am building saasbudha.com for an angel investor and he can give you more feedback if you upload your page. This is the feedback he gave me - https://www.saasbudha.com/saas/open-project
Just updated and added a visual element. Let me know what you think if you have the chance to check it out.
Nice one! It is much easier to understand now.
Thank you for the feedback!
Yea, it turns out the main monitor I was working on didn't display colors properly haha.
I agree about having a visual example, I actually have a video demo that I did for someone but I haven't gotten the ok to showcase it yet.
I'll look into it. Although is not really going to be a saas. I have the process basically created so I will get some editors to actually implement it while I can focus on the business side.
It's not bad!
So, the spacing in the hero section (top headline) and the button appear a bit off. The button could be bigger and closer to the text for example.
But more importantly, the main headline isn't telling me much. It explains what YOU do, but not in a way that makes me care. Does that make sense?
Like, why do I need bite sized videos? That's the first thought that popped into my head. Try to think of a way to connect the dots for people so that they reach an "ah ha!" moment.
Something that could resonate is "reusing" content. Like:
"In seconds - use your existing videos for cross-platform social media content"
Hi Justin, I just added a couple of changes. I'm still thinking about the tagline, but I added a visual in the hero section and a couple of other changes. Let me know what you think if you get the chance to check it out.
looks better!
Thanks for taking the time.
I'll have to look into it, I just used a template otherwise I would spend way too much time on things that are not as important yet haha.
I agree, the current headline is still too general. I think once I decide the exact target market it will be easier to make it more relatable.