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Is this landing page overkill for a simple checklist/guide?

I'm currently going through the immigration process here in Mexico and I cannot express how frustrating it has been so far (it took four visits and ~6 useless hours just to get past the first step of the process because of inaccuracies and stupid nuances that aren't stated on the federal government's website).

In fact, it was so frustrating that I wanted to pull together this checklist/guide just so that others don't have to go through the same frustrations. However, I'm wondering if this landing page is overkill for that this type of product, especially since it's so "simple" compared to other products on Indie Hackers?

And should I put quantifiable benefits on there? Some people pay $500 (or more) for a lawyer to help them through this process because of inaccuracies and nuances, and others (including myself) have wasted hours at the immigration office only for someone to tell them that they're missing a document that isn't even listed online as a requirement.

https://simplecanje.carrd.co/

FYI the "Let's Get Started" buttons intentionally don't work at the moment. I'm currently in the process of integrating Stripe with it.

on January 20, 2020
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    It's a good page
    I'd just add like Mexican visa or whatever to the canji part in the 1st title... As I had no idea of that name

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      Very good point. And thank you for the feedback!

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    Maybe slightly overkill. I'm thinking the only section you need is the top one.

    A couple other things:

    • I'd say "We" can help you with that instead of "I".
    • I'd also remove the "Based on my first-hand experiences getting my temporary residence visa" part and just say what the product is.
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      Thanks for the feedback! I definitely have more thinking to do.

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