It would be great if you could give me some feedback on my landing page

(Site is not 100% mobile responsive yet, also may look weird at 4K)
Toko is an online platform to create an e-commerce business. When designing the landing page, I wanted to make it modern and simple.
I would love some feedback and what improvements I could make to it!

Seamus Donnellan

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on August 7, 2020

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Hey Seamus! I liked the theme of the website but on the downside, here is what I think :

1 - Very little information is given.
2 - The style looks generic.
3 - The email input field can be designed better.
4 - Use custom illustrations for authenticity.
5 - It's too early for you for feedback. I feel a lot of work is remaining & once done it will turn out to be great!

I hope this helps! I would love if you could do the same for LeadCruise.com!

Goodluck & Cheers!

yugen

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  As I've said in other replies, I am working on some higher quality ad copy.
  
  What do you mean when you say that it looks generic? Could you show me some other sites that use the same kind of style (not trying to be a smart ass, genuinely curious)
  
  The illustrations will eventually be replaced with custom graphics that show off specific functions of the site, for example product management.
  
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Hey everyone! I made some of the changes you suggested I do, and whilst most text is currently Lorem, I am quite happy. Toko
Let me know what you think!

After I get the product in an MVP stage, I will definitely be adding custom graphics, and possibly an entire site redesign

bigdon

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Hi Seamus,
Just some quick tips:
- The signup form above the fold is using a square button while the other buttons are rounded.
- Try to play around with the font sizes a bit more. The headings (especially h2) and paragraphs are not that different from each other. You can also make the contract bigger by playing around with the colour or font-weight.
- If you'd like to create more contrast with colour, you can use a really light tint of the background. So for the purple wave part try hsl(253 100% 95% / 1) for example. This way you can also create contrast without touching the font-weight.
- I'm a big fan of big line heights. So 2rem for example.
MrAtiebatie

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  Didn't even notice I hadn't applied a border radius to that button; should be fixed now!
  The font sizes definitely are my least favourite part of the site, I am going to have a play around with them tonight.
  I will definitely be adding some line height!
  
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1. Instead of graphic illustration, I will display snapshots of real sites built using tools
2. How is this better than many products like Shopify, Prestashop, Magento, etc?
3. I don't like the font used, doesn't look neat to me.
ajnikhil

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  I personally don't agree with you on the font, I quite like it, however I will ask a lot of other people on some web design/UX Discord servers what they think of it.
  
  I am definitely going to improve ad copy in future deploys of the site.
  
  I am also working on some custom illustrations that show off the specific functions of the app, for example the site builder, product management etc.
  
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    Don't get stuck in your own bias, listen to what people are saying.
    Anyway, font/ ad copy, etc are minor things. Worry about finding the answer to "Why would anyone use your tool instead of other big tools?" It's a mature market you are entering in. Good font and colors can't be the reason.
    
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Hi, Here's what I could find in few seconds hovering over the website:
1. Use an SVG instead of PNG or JEPG for logo & illustrations it will look crisper.
2. In nav links are just spans if you don't have links just remove them, this just creates more confusion.
3. The landing page doesn't give much information about exactly what your building is different.
Hope this helps.
fayeed

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  Other pages aren't currently finished yet, however the spans will be updated to anchor tags when they are.
  The illustrations are all SVG, however I do agree that I should use an SVG logo instead of the PNG.
  I also agree that the ad copy isn't amazing, however I am currently brainstorming some ideas.
  
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