Iterating on the Landing Page: Need feedback again!!

It's getting better:

.. Good main head, subhead and clear value prop

.. Body font small and low contrast

.. The images are visually stronger than title and copy text content, distracting/reducing how much people will read the main meat

.. Section "how does it work" is actually features ("how it works" is usually 1,2,3). Seeing from other comments that there is confusion what your app does, maybe exactly that might be good title for that section...

.. Numbered listing like in your 1,2,3,4,5 section are used to signify order, but actually your points are just random ideas why somebody might use you app, without any particular order => maybe change the numbers to small images

.. None of the numbered points matched for me. But actually some of your features like reading lists might be nice. Problem is that because none of the numbered points match, i feel that your app is not good fit for me. => Maybe add title "good reasons to read more" or similar.

.. Final CTA "start reading " is tiny => change to big colorful happy button.

Hope this helps & good luck

Great looking landing page! I think that I understood what your app was doing (sending you notification to start reading and allowing to to organize notes on books I guess 😬) but it's more a big headline that I think is missing. Right now it feels like it requires too much effort to have to go read the smaller texts.

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Change the header "Do you think you do not read enough?" to "Don't read enough?". TBH, a lot of the phrasing on your page needs to be more concise. Remember, most people browse/skim over landing pages, not throughly read it.

Also, a bit too much ambiguity on what the product actually is - Personally, I would include a strong declarative statement on the front page stating the purpose of the product/how it helps you to read more.

agree with some other folks-- what does the app actually do?

Hey Alper, I just scrolled Indie hackers and thought... I know that face :-) So great to see you joined the community and working on such a cool thing...

Looking at the website, I had a bunch of ideas... let's grab a virtual coffee one day and discuss.

But in general, a great idea, and a very nice landing page. I'd also add some little info after someone clicks the "Start Reading" button, as I felt lost when being prompted with a sign-up without any additional information.

So cool you are doing your thing! Congrats! You have a new fan :-)

I wasn't sure what it did. So I clicked 'Start Reading' and was presented with a registration page.

I think the ambiguity is fine as a curiosity hook but it might be tough to convince people to register without knowing what they're registering for.

It does a great job of selling the benefits of reading. I just don't know what the app helps users do.