✨It's happening again! ✨ Post your page and I'll write a haiku about it!
- Product Name
- Link to Landing Page
And that's it! No context.
I have to figure out what problem you solve or what you do JUST from the landing page, and write a poem about it (5-7-5 syllables)
Example:
- Overmind
- https://www.overmind.wiki/
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@Overmind, I've just had a look at your https://www.overmind.wiki/
Are you sure it's a good idea to start from a strong negative?
You use quite strong language there.
How do you know my X is a mess?
As far as I am concerned it is not.
Here is my limerick for you:
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Nice, thanks for the limerick!
Good things to think about. I think it's ok to start with a negative (the pain being solved), and it seems to be attracting signups. I agree the assumption is very strong, but if people who don't need Overmind self-select themselves out (because they don't identify with the pain), I think that's a positive - it helps qualify the signups. Honestly though I do need to revamp my landing, so it's worth reconsidering.
Here's a quick one for you:
Ooh nice, I just tried to make mine more clear!
Criteria
https://criteria.sh
Hey, I like the idea and I think I got the gist of it from the first part of your page, but it was a bit illusive. I got what you are doing, I didn't get how and that's a deal breaker.
Can you animate that browser screenshot or make a series of images explaining the process?
Thanks for the feedback. I was thinking of annotating the screenshot, it is a bit non-obvious right now.