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I've redesigned my website, what do you think?

Over the past few days, I've been working on a start-up idea. It's all logistics and the idea is to convey 'inexpensive and efficient' as the main message.

Here's the link: https://xfreight.africa

on February 16, 2020
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    Would love to chat with you about the redesign! My partner and I are giving feedback on a Google Hangout all week. Check us out! https://flounders.io/

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      Hi David. I'm currently adding new screens, I'd love to chat later on. Thanks for the offer btw :)

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    Hi James,

    First of all, good work!

    Just had a quick look and here are some remarks:

    • You don't highlight why people should work with you but rather only what you do
    • Try to put forward the main points around which you position yourself (value props, unfair advantage...)
    • Even-though the design is nice, you miss some level of hierarchy. I don't see any difference in "level" between your first block "Disrupting logistic" and "Driving Change" which has the tendency of losing the customer in what you actually do.

    If you want to discuss this further don't hesitate to reach out, I'll be glad to help (you can PM me)!

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      Hi Lem, thanks for the comment. I'll definitely PM you :)

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    I don't see how inexpensive and efficient is conveyed.

    They key takeaway for me when I look at the landing page is disruption and innovation.

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      Hi rcavezza, thanks for pointing that out. I'm kind of torn between the two very different concepts. Emphasis on innovation or cost-effectiveness.

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    Beautiful and modern landing page. You nailed it James.

    I like the concept you are providing here.

    Quick question for you, are you setting up a 'powerloop' service where drivers can go an pick up freight fast and per order?

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      Hi makr, I'm going for pretty much the same concept, but with lighter vehicles and a lot more control. The idea is to do instant deliveries...

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        Same day shipped, same day delivered? I like the concept. Are you talking vans or even cars? Best of luck

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          Yes, from motorbikes right up to large vans, ie, Mercedes-Benz

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    Hey James. I think it looks quite all right!

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    Hi @LazyBird55,

    The website did'nt open for me. I am firefox as my browser.

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      That's odd... would you mind sharing the error code?

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