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😍 I've updated my landing page, need your feedback!

Hello Indiehackers,

I am working on https://helppie.me and recently I've updated my landing page. I need your reviews on that.

Cheers

on November 4, 2020
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    The page looks neat and clean @heyarviind. Personally, I loved the clean design of the page. However, I would suggest adding few more sections to convince the users.

    You can take a look at my product, ruttl to get some reference.

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      Thank you Vijay for commenting.

      I was thinking about this and planned to add screenshot of dashboard and few testimonials.

      I am following Brucira and Ruttle from the beginning of their journey and learnt many things 😎

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        Oh that's a great pleasure to hear haha!

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    I like the emojis approach. I just noticed the design of price table is slightly inconsistent than the whole site design. Otherwise your site is clean :)

    Is this widget embeddable on Notion?

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    Hey @heyarviind,

    Cool idea and page!

    I really like that you used the actual widget within the home page! However, it took me a second to understand that it's an example, and the button actually does nothing when I click it. Maybe add some action to it- possibly explaining that it is an example.

    Also- I found the page a little too cluttered and I think adding some margins could improve it (I'm not a designer so please take with a grain of salt).

    Good luck!

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      Hey Ramram,

      Yes, it is really confusing for the users to figure out if its an example or something else. I will add the example text/image at the top of the right box to make it more clear.

      I am experimenting on design, will add more space to make things look clean and simple :)

      Thank you so much for the feedback.

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        Good luck!

        Something to consider: it might actually be cool for users to not know this is an example, until after clicking the 'Send feedback' button (maybe by adding an explaining modal then). This can be an awesome way to show the value of the product to users, as experienced from the other side .

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          Right, but users don't click on the "send feedback" button until they get to know that this is an example.

          They will search for example somewhere and at the end might click on send feedback button just to say that you should add an example button somewhere.

          But I will try to make it like you said and see how it comes at the end ;)

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            I actually have clicked the button :)!
            Isn't that what your product do? Show a 'Send feedback' button when there's a problem?

            Anyway this is totally up to you, and I might be missing a lot of context 😬

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    Hi!
    Overall I like the style! Simple and clean, straight to the point!

    First impression: my eyes get drawn to the header (which is good!) but the header sentence isn’t that good in my opinion. “Users using” makes it harder to read it. Maybe something like “A widget for collecting user feedback”, or “Get user feedback using a widget”, or “Your user feedback from a (simple) widget”, or “a feedback collecting widget”. Why even use the word users? “Get feedback using a widget” or so. Keep it simple and short! Idk, my first languages is not English.

    The after effect: It took me a while to get the picture on the right next to the header, it was an example widget😂. Maybe say it above, “example”?

    Plans: really nice, love it! Maybe one thing to try is to align the buttons on the same height, with the middle one being a bit higher, because it is bigger. I would also move the small horizontal line to the same height for the outer two plans. Or maybe ad “forever” under the free plan.

    FAQ looks good! A lot of text though, if it is easy I would try to make dropdowns of it, just to see how it looks.

    Thanks for making the service, keeping it in mind for my own projects!

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      Hey, thank you so much for the detailed explanation 🥰

      1. You are right, I will improve the text to make it more clear.

      2. I forgot to add the example text or image at the top of the right box (It's confusing
        without it for sure) 😅

      3. Nice point, that's the weird UI to look at. Placing buttons at the bottom will make it more consistent

      4. Actually there were only 4 FAQs in the beginning so I made the answers always visible and then FAQs increased and design remained the same... I should surely change to collapse FAQs.

      Thanks for pointing things out and letting me know 😋