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Just built my first landing page. Does the product come across clearly?

by ethical_hacking

Hi Everyone!

EazyPay.me is my first proper attempt at IndieHacking. Would greatly appreciate any feedback.

Cheers!

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on June 20, 2021
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    I understand how I can create an invoice really quickly but I don't get how it will get paid faster.

    prateekrmathur's avatar prateekrmathur
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    5 years ago
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      Hi prateekrmathur,

      Well spotted. The features that will help users get paid faster haven’t been finalised just yet, so I haven’t included them on the landing page.

      But - if I’m trying to get users now, it makes sense to narrow my problem and solution headlines and statements to what already exists on the platform.

      Thanks for the feedback prateekrmathur! You've given me something to think about. Really appreciated.

      ethical_hacking's avatar ethical_hacking
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      5 years ago
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        Awesome!

        prateekrmathur's avatar prateekrmathur
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    Your product and the value behind it came across very clearly to me. I didn't have to do a lot of reading to understand your product. Now I've used somewhat similar software so I had a general understanding of what it'd do almost immediately, but still. The live preview thing is very cool

    bigbunny's avatar bigbunny
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    5 years ago
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      Thanks for the feedback, bigbunny!

      Glad you liked the invoice template being on the landing page. I got the idea from Harry Dry’s fantastic article on landing pages: https://www.indiehackers.com/post/my-step-by-step-guide-to-landing-pages-that-convert-9daefb2064

      You mentioned ‘live preview’. The invoice generator on the landing page is fully usable, you can even send it to a client without logging in or creating an account. From your experience of the site, have I made that clear enough?

      Cheers!

      ethical_hacking's avatar ethical_hacking
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    This is actually really good! Its not just product screenshots but you can actually try it. Towards the end of the page I noticed myself scrolling and skimming a lot and I didn't read anything. It might be because I'm not a target customer (yet?) but it could be something to look into

    faraaz's avatar faraaz
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      Thanks faraaz!

      ethical_hacking's avatar ethical_hacking
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    Hi Chris!

    I find this page quite nice. We can see the product (even make a try!) and the value proposition is understandable.

    The only thing that I think could be improved is about "get paid faster" because one can think EazyPay.me deals with payment transactions, which it does not. (correct me if I'm wrong?).

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    5 years ago
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      Thanks loicm!

      You're right, EazyPay.me doesn't offer payment transactions... yet. Online checkout directly on the invoice is what I'm working on now. So I'm really glad to hear that it fits in with the value proposition so well that you thought of it.

      Thanks again loicm!

      ethical_hacking's avatar ethical_hacking
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