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Just finished my first landing page ever in order to validate my idea. Looking for feedback

Hello everyone,

I'm super proud to have finally started my side project and finished my first ever landing page after doing cuustomer research for a while:
https://boardcade.com

I have tried to follow as best i could the general guidance that is found here, in particular on these 2 posts:
My step-by-step guide to landing pages that convert
5 landing page mistakes indie hackers keep doing over and over

But since it is a LP to validate an idea, and that i have no product & no user i couldn't implement everything, like the social proof for example.

I chose to request only an email to reduce friction, so I can receive any indication of interest. Later, I'll send a survey to anyone who provided an email to gather more information.

ps: do you have feedback on the name too ? As a non-english native i'm not sure how good it is. if it's easy to pronounce and/or is memorable enough.

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Landing Page Feedback
on February 3, 2023
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    Congrats on your landing page!

    The design seems good, but you can make it even better!

    The image in the main banner seems to be causing the page's width to extend abnormally. Also with a footer, though small, the page can look more complete.

    Regarding the name; it looks good, however, you may also want to try branition.com to try even more name ideas.

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      Can i ask you on what device you are seeing this ? Or maybe a quick screenshot ?
      I'be had the footer feedback a few time now, so i think i have to do it !
      I'm not sure what to put in it though, any advice ?

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        I viewed it on my 1366px laptop.

        For now, you can add a contact button, copyright notice, social buttons, terms, and privacy, and even you can add a "join beta" button that shows what the current signup button shows.

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    Nice work, can't imagine the engineering effort it's taking to get this across the line!

    Edit: It also looks like when I click the privacy policy and scroll down the privacy policy link dissapears, not sure if that's intentional

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    Hello, your landing page looks very good. I like the simplicity and the small animations look great.
    The design fits the idea pretty well and is easy to understand. The only thing I noticed is that I can't use the "Get Started" buttons in the pricing section. Maybe you could put the window for the beta there again.
    Oh, and you may have a typo on the pricing section in the title.
    But overall the landing page looks great and the idea is also very interesting.

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    Howdy @Remi auxven

    Here are 3-points and a video review for Boardcade

    1. Focus on the 1 thing you want visitors to do (email capture)
    2. Make the CTA button consistent throughout ("Get early access" or "Get beta access")
    3. Add pizzaz with video and/or gifs

    Watch the full review: Boardcade Landing Page Review

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      ok WOW ! The amount of stuff you just gave me is insane. Thank you so much.
      I will implement what i can today before starting to launch so ads next week to see if people sign-up.

      For the live demo I totally agree, and if I ever get to build the product I will ofc have some. But rigth now everything was made in figma x) So even a video would take way too much time.

      For the social proofs I also agree, but don't have any yet, once (if) they come i will for sure add them to the page.

      All the rest is clearly doable so I'm gonna get started !!

      Thank you so so much !

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