Just finished new landing page. Need feedback!

Check out the updates - https://www.borrow.nyc/

Let me know what you think.

on January 29, 2020

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Hey! Nice site, good job. 👍

Some things that you might consider changing:
1. The main headline is very vague — doesn't say what the product is about. Maybe exchange it with the one you have further down -> "BORROWING MONEY HAS NEVER BEEN SO EASY" and then proceed with why that is so.
2. The site contains a lot of text — that's maybe good for the SEO but I am not sure people will read it. And it is a bit small.
3. I guess it's temporary that none of the buttons/links work, right?
All the best.
moorstas

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  Thank you, @moorstas! I completely agree with you. I've been having a hard time with nailing down the copy, but now that I've got the basics laid out, I'm going to hone in on the copy, CTA and overall message. And yes, the links is next on my list. I appreciate your feedback!
  
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    I know what you mean — getting the copy right takes such a long time. But it is super crucial. I, myself, spent days playing around with word for the header of my site and still don't know if they're good.
    
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      Agreed! I looked at your landing page as well, and I think your message is solid. Very concise. Follow me and stay up to date, I'll tweak what I have and send it in the new iteration. Thanks again
      
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