Just launched landing page and would love some feedback
Hello! Last night I launched the landing page for Tramline (https://www.tramline.io) a SaaS platform for data science and machine learning engineering teams to monitor their models in production.
We are pre-MVP and really just getting started. The audience is a bit niche but I would love any feedback whatsoever on the page and the way we talk about the product.
Thanks so much!
Congrats on the launch of the landing page. Looks beautiful. Love the transitions as you scroll through.
I just like it :)
Well done! ;)
Hi Garrett, I recently launched a landing page as well. https://www.scribbl.co/
I am not an expert on landing pages nor am I a member of the audience you are targeting but I will share my feedback in hopes that it helps any way.
Your headline seems to do a great job of sharing what your product does. I recently received some feedback from someone that recommended I adjust my headline to state something that shares with the reader why they should you care.
You also may benefit from having a CTA that shows you if this person is really interested. Maybe something like "join the waitlist" or "try free"....
The 3 benefits you share maybe could benefit from more descriptive pictures.
Great job keeping it clean and simple!
Co-founder @ Scribbl.co
It's actually pretty good Garret.
Not a lot of feedback, but here's some:
Craig
Even as someone who's not involved with data science or machine learning, I think your landing page is great. The messaging is all there and explains well the value of the product.
However, there is something I'd change. I feel like the feature headlines should be more benefits based, instead of just stating what the feature does. The headline text should explain the benefit of using the feature or the pain the feature solves.
For example, for the "Explore Log Data" feature, I like the copy in the paragraph "open exploration into exactly what your model is doing" which explainswhy the feature is beneficial. I'd try to work that into the headline instead of the customer needing to read the paragraph to understand. Maybe something like "always keep an eye on your models behavior" or "never wonder what your model's been up to"
Congratulations on the launch! Would like to see how the dashboards look in the product, the current graphs look generic, they are attractive by the way, the website looks clean but showing the product would be great!