Just Launched new Landing Pages. What's wrong with it?
Hey!
Just launched my new site for Potion and I built it with Potion.
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Anything that doesn't make sense?
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What should be removed or what should be added?
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Any questions that aren't answered?
Thanks!
Theres a horizontal scroll. Probably a missing div or something in the HTML.
The headline is clear. You explain what the app does. One idea:
Wouldn't it be nice if you show BEFORE & AFTER shots of the notion. The header image does nothing for me. But that would be awesome. You have to really scroll to get to:
"Potion is great for these kinds of sites"
which is the main event. The wow factor. Figure out how to incorporate that into the header.
Thanks for the ideas! I'll think about those. Maybe I should move "Potion is great for these sites up". I figured that it would be best if they knew how Potion works and what some of the features are first.
Hey Noah. This page is solid! The old way / With Potion, that's a great use of that pattern. The fact that the page was made with Potion is A+. "Update and it's live", that's also great. The kinds of pages it's great for: awesome.
Since you're starting, I'd try to reduce the anxiety about the question: "Are they going to be around for long? If I create my site with this platform, will I get burned?"
See: https://sharpen.page/jtbd/to-add-appeal-first-reduce-anxieties/
Good luck!
Thanks for the feedback! I'll check out that article.
I feel like the best way to reduce anxiety is show more testimonials and show lots of people using the service. Obviously that is hard in the beginning. I'll work on getting those quickly though.
Thanks!