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Just launched our new landing page ahead of our public launch!

Would love to hear any thoughts and feedback :) https://sizle.io/

on November 3, 2019
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    Nice work!

    This is super minor, but based on most of your landing page copy, I gather sales reps are your target persona.

    Maybe you can call it out more specifically in your h2?

    Sizle gives sales teams the tools to build, send and track beautiful, dynamic presentations – all in the browser

    Also, why did you include "all in the browser" as part of your h2?

    Congrats on the launch! I could see this being super useful, especially in the proposal stages of a sales cycle.

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    Hey Jeremy, here are some of my comments.

    ----PRODUCT-----
    Still not sure what is your product is about? Is it a presentation deck builder a communication tool? not clear at all.

    ----DESIGN-----
    The site looks good, like the illustration in the header.
    -I would scale up the input field and the placeholder text.
    -Tone down little bit the shadow game

    Hope that helps ;)

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    Tested in mobile, looking good.
    A few thoughts:

    • it's not clearly understand what service about in a first seconds(need to read tittle that changed). Probably you can move image to the top of the block. But need to A/B
    • (Not about landing) Create comparison with competitors page.
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    Quick tips

    Quick questions for you :)

    • Did you look at any templates, if so why didn't you use it?
    • Did you look at any landing page builders, if so why didn't you use it?
    • What did you struggle with creating the landing page?